Hi
I'm a 65+ male living in the UK looking for an Editor for my first attempt at story writing. The story is approximately 7.4 K long and would be in the Group Sex category. It would be good if as well as the usual spelling and grammar you are able to help with story and continuity. Ideally I would like to have female input but am more than happy to accept any help available.
Below are a couple of short paragraphs from the story.
Thank you for reading
'Jean looked at me, gave me a saucy smile, and slowly undid all the buttons down the front of her cardigan. Then she slide it off her shoulders to revel a light blue lacy bra. She didn't have the biggest breasts, perhaps a B or C cup, but still a nice size. I have never have been one for large porn star size boobs, so good start here then!'
'Moving closer I moved my head down gently licking and kissing the inside of her thighs as I slowly moved up to her sex. As I reached her lips I gently slide my tongue up the full length not pushing hard enough to part her lips and tasted the liquid that was there. If ever they made an aphrodisiac of that it would be irresistible I thought'
I'm a 65+ male living in the UK looking for an Editor for my first attempt at story writing. The story is approximately 7.4 K long and would be in the Group Sex category. It would be good if as well as the usual spelling and grammar you are able to help with story and continuity. Ideally I would like to have female input but am more than happy to accept any help available.
Below are a couple of short paragraphs from the story.
Thank you for reading
'Jean looked at me, gave me a saucy smile, and slowly undid all the buttons down the front of her cardigan. Then she slide it off her shoulders to revel a light blue lacy bra. She didn't have the biggest breasts, perhaps a B or C cup, but still a nice size. I have never have been one for large porn star size boobs, so good start here then!'
'Moving closer I moved my head down gently licking and kissing the inside of her thighs as I slowly moved up to her sex. As I reached her lips I gently slide my tongue up the full length not pushing hard enough to part her lips and tasted the liquid that was there. If ever they made an aphrodisiac of that it would be irresistible I thought'
