Editor needed for first story

[Widow_lover]

Hi!

I've almost completed my first story for the site. It is pretty much straight sex involving a young widow. Approx 3500 words. No rush. Looking for some light grammar and dialogue editing and general opinions on story flow. Please PM.

Thanks!

 

[CiaoSteve]

Happy to take a look. PM me if interested with your e-mail address. I'll reply and you can send me the text of the story by mail.