Editor Needed for Brother/Sister Story

[Tyzmartar]

Greetings,

I am just wrapping up my new brother/sister story. I have published three stories here previously, but have yet to make use of an editor. I thought that it would be nice to have an extra pair of eyes check this one out before I publish. I still want to do a little tweaking to it, but I would also like to have someone lined up to check it out just as soon as I am done in a day or two.

When all is said and done it will be between 16,000 to 17,000 words. I was looking for the usual grammar/spelling help. I would also welcome any other suggestions to make my story better.

I've yet to nail down a title. The gist of the story is as follows:
The sister smacks into a tree in a skiing accident, the brother looks after her. They end up in a sexual relationship but the only time they ever speak of it to each other is by texting on their phones. During their erotic encounters they do not speak at all.

Here are my other stories if you want to get a feel for what your up against:
Goodnight Kisses //www.literotica.com/s/goodnight-kisses
Jake and Lauren's Secret //www.literotica.com/s/jake-and-laurens-secret
Showing Aubrey //www.literotica.com/s/showing-aubrey

Thank you.

 

[zach20092]

love to help... just reading your earlier stories

Greetings,

I am just wrapping up my new brother/sister story. I have published three stories here previously, but have yet to make use of an editor. I thought that it would be nice to have an extra pair of eyes check this one out before I publish. I still want to do a little tweaking to it, but I would also like to have someone lined up to check it out just as soon as I am done in a day or two.

When all is said and done it will be between 16,000 to 17,000 words. I was looking for the usual grammar/spelling help. I would also welcome any other suggestions to make my story better.

I've yet to nail down a title. The gist of the story is as follows:
The sister smacks into a tree in a skiing accident, the brother looks after her. They end up in a sexual relationship but the only time they ever speak of it to each other is by texting on their phones. During their erotic encounters they do not speak at all.

Here are my other stories if you want to get a feel for what your up against:
Goodnight Kisses //www.literotica.com/s/goodnight-kisses
Jake and Lauren's Secret //www.literotica.com/s/jake-and-laurens-secret
Showing Aubrey //www.literotica.com/s/showing-aubrey

Thank you.

 

[ThatEditorGuy]

interesting

love to read it over for you. I'd like to see how you get the 'no-talking' thing to work