Chimney Sweep
Kind of a big deal
- Joined
- Sep 26, 2003
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Howdy!
I have two stories ready to go but I am hoping to find an editor to give them a read before I release them. I have read and re-read these two, looking for errors and boo boos and gremlins and I can't find any more.
I am looking for an editor to find any glaring mistakes in grammar or spelling or pace or word usage. I don't need help in plot or character or any of that business, but I am open to any constructive criticism. These are 99% done and just need that final polish.
Both stories are further chapters of this:
http://www.literotica.com/s/in-charge-ch-01
Length is similar to the link above. Erotic couplings. The general plot is: two lovers take turn being the boss of the shenanigans for the evening. Chapter 1 is published. chapter 2 has her in charge using a stack of cards for her instructions, and chapter three has him in charge again but with a more impromptu execution.
Thanks!
-CS
I have two stories ready to go but I am hoping to find an editor to give them a read before I release them. I have read and re-read these two, looking for errors and boo boos and gremlins and I can't find any more.
I am looking for an editor to find any glaring mistakes in grammar or spelling or pace or word usage. I don't need help in plot or character or any of that business, but I am open to any constructive criticism. These are 99% done and just need that final polish.
Both stories are further chapters of this:
http://www.literotica.com/s/in-charge-ch-01
Length is similar to the link above. Erotic couplings. The general plot is: two lovers take turn being the boss of the shenanigans for the evening. Chapter 1 is published. chapter 2 has her in charge using a stack of cards for her instructions, and chapter three has him in charge again but with a more impromptu execution.
Thanks!
-CS
