With the original author's permission, I have written a "spin-off" to The Seducer: Mission Impossible (a Loving Wives series by austin.erotica). The first part of my story imagines the life of the husband (who barely appears in the original story) during that story's events. Then, my story imagines (1) how the wife might have looked back at what happened in the original, (2) how the husband might have found out what happened, and (3) how their lives would have gone on from there. Actually that third element is just barely covered in my story so far; it would be the subject of future chapters, if the first chapter draws any interest.
If you're wary about the LW category...well, so am I! There is no revenge in the story, nor is the husband a happy or wimpy cuckhold. There are many sex scenes, but I wrote them last. I tried to put equal (if not greater) emphasis on drama and psychology.
My story is about 16,000 words. Much of my day job involves writing, so I expect you'll find the piece fairly polished. However, I am sure my punctuation is off in places, and I'm struggling with conventions of creative writing (presenting dialogue; handling/shifting point of view; etc.). This would be my first submission to Literotica.
Given that there are male and female characters in the story, I think I could benefit from having two editors (one of each gender). However, I would be grateful from any assistance from anyone. This stuff is hard to write; it must be hard to edit!
I am prepared to be humble. I edit and get edited all the time. As an editor, I am pretty brutal.
If you're wary about the LW category...well, so am I! There is no revenge in the story, nor is the husband a happy or wimpy cuckhold. There are many sex scenes, but I wrote them last. I tried to put equal (if not greater) emphasis on drama and psychology.
My story is about 16,000 words. Much of my day job involves writing, so I expect you'll find the piece fairly polished. However, I am sure my punctuation is off in places, and I'm struggling with conventions of creative writing (presenting dialogue; handling/shifting point of view; etc.). This would be my first submission to Literotica.
Given that there are male and female characters in the story, I think I could benefit from having two editors (one of each gender). However, I would be grateful from any assistance from anyone. This stuff is hard to write; it must be hard to edit!
I am prepared to be humble. I edit and get edited all the time. As an editor, I am pretty brutal.
