Editor for resubmission...

[txblush]

I recently received a reader's comment on my use of verb tenses and how it's killing the story. And yes while there is a lot of truth to the comment I felt it would only frustrate him or her (Anonymous), if I replied in the comments sections for all readers to see, that I couldn't do what was suggested, because I don't have the experience to edit the story properly for resubmission. Nor can I make the other changes that I’ve wanted to do to the structure/plot, because I'm too close to the writing to see where to make those changes.

I'm looking for a volunteer editor with experience in grammar, structure, and plot for my BDSM novel, 'For Her Own Good.' I’ve contacted several on the VE listing, but thought I’d post here as well.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=903018&page=submissions

Thank you

 

[turner28]

Hey hun. I have been offline for a bit but if you still need an editor feel free to contact me. I am not a grammar nazi - some things are done on purpose for the story.

I look forward to hearing from you.

ET

 

[txblush]

Sorry for the late reply. Thanks but I found an editor.