Editor for First Story submission

[willywanker]

I've been writing and posting to the BB but this is my first try at a solo story. Its male, female, female.
Husband gets special birthday present. Ok, not the first time its been done, but I could use an experienced person to read thru it and check it for me. Any body up for a challenge?

 

[Budman]

hey Willy: go to the editors forum on the BB. You'll find lots there willing to help.

damn i hate fat finners



[Edited by Budman on 03-06-2001 at 12:52 PM]

 

[*bratcat*]

i am no expert...