Editor/ beta reader for Halloween contest story

[storyteller19]

Hello, I am looking for an editor for my 20,000 word incest story between a brother and sister. The story is broken into 3 main parts, the first is the brother, sister, and their friends facing against a fire fighter turned forest fire abomination themed slasher. It is a standard horror slasher monster story.

The second part is the bother and sister trying to console each other through trauma after being the only survivors and their budding relationship. They also end up doing research on the monster and realize he will strike again.

The third part is them going to face the monster before he can burn up an entire camp of kids.

I have done multiple edits and am hoping for someone to help catch what has slipped through and/or to be a beta reader.

 

[OhDave1]

Hello storyteller19 I am a proofreader for several authors on Literotica. As you have it well-edited, it sounds to be right up my alley: putting the prepublication polish on a story. If interested, contact me to explore further; either send a PM to OhDave1 or use the new direct email, and I will reply with my email to exchange files.
My Literotica profile is at https://www.literotica.com/authors/OhDave1

 

[storyteller19]

I just sent a pm. Thank you!