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PerfectDefect

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Hello.
Obviously I am looking for some work to edit, and while I do not have as much experience as I would like, I do know a thing or two.
I have a variety of available time slots, and so would like to keep the stories under 7,500 words. I am particular about stories involving; incest, taboo, reluctance, toys, masturbation, oral, anal, gay men, and lesbians.
If you are interested in my services, feel free to private message me.
 
Hello.
Obviously I am looking for some work to edit, and while I do not have as much experience as I would like, I do know a thing or two.
I have a variety of available time slots, and so would like to keep the stories under 7,500 words. I am particular about stories involving; incest, taboo, reluctance, toys, masturbation, oral, anal, gay men, and lesbians.
If you are interested in my services, feel free to private message me.

Your approach is all wrong in my opinion. Smooth it out, dog.

"I'm willing to edit. I may not know all the answers but I can get you published on Lit. I have some time I can devote to smoothing your words into silk. Just ask."

Now that's working it!
 
I agree, I was reading that and I couldn't make sense of it. To be particular about something would mean to like one thing more than the rest. Ie. "I like to eat meat, but I'm particular to steak." Perhaps not a great example, but c'est la vie. Anyhow, what I mean is that the way you phrase it, to me, makes it sound like you could either particularly like those kinks, or be particularly adverse to them. So just so that people know what kind of work to send you, try rephrasing that part.
 
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