Editing help wanted- Lesbian Sub story 19.5K words

[rimaday]

I am looking for editing help. Open to all input, but want grammar help and suggestions for story line, character development etc.

I have published over 50 stories and score well, but never catch everything self editing.

This is a new chapter in the Principal's Turn series.

Please let me know if you are interested and available.

No rush for turn around.

Thanks!