Editing a story about computer programming?

[LadyClaire]

Hi

I’m putting the finishing touches to an erotic and softcore/reluctant bondage story with lots of technical computer programming terms.

I’ve done the best I can but would appreciate someone who actually knows what they’re talking about having a look?

Claire

 

[29wordsforsnow]

Hi

I’m putting the finishing touches to an erotic and softcore/reluctant bondage story with lots of technical computer programming terms.

I’ve done the best I can but would appreciate someone who actually knows what they’re talking about having a look?

Claire

Could you give us a hint about word count and what specifics you're looking for, beta-reading or also proofreading. Thanks!

 

[LadyClaire]

Oh, it’s not long - probably 1500 words.

Really I’m looking for someone to confirm that I’m talking absolute rubbish on some of the technical bits (it’s set at a programming conference). However if someone wanted to provide a bit of feedback or point out my typos I’d definitely appreciate it!

 

[MetaBob]

Oh, it’s not long - probably 1500 words.

Really I’m looking for someone to confirm that I’m talking absolute rubbish on some of the technical bits (it’s set at a programming conference). However if someone wanted to provide a bit of feedback or point out my typos I’d definitely appreciate it!

I can take a look, if you like.

For reference, the first two chapters (excluding the prologue) of my Were-Tigress are set at a programming conference, though I don't go into jargon.

Were-Tigress, Chapter 1
Were-Tigress, Chapter 2

 

[LadyClaire]

Thanks everyone, I’ve got a few volunteers now.

Bob, do you want to DM me your email address and I’ll send it over as soon as it’s finished?

Claire

 

[MetaBob]

Thanks everyone, I’ve got a few volunteers now.

Bob, do you want to DM me your email address and I’ll send it over as soon as it’s finished?

Claire

Will do. Good fortune!

 

[jaF0]

Will there be a data dump into this thread drive for debugging?

 

[LadyClaire]

That sounds like a very personal question!