Cadere
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- Oct 23, 2011
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So I sent a request using the Volunteer Editors' page to only a couple editors. One never replied, and the other--though was listed on his VE page as able to edit Gay Male stories--posted in his profile that he looked at no such things. I found that out late after sending him a request and was smashing my head against the keyboard. I don't think he'll even take it into consideration, if he ever receives my request.
So I have turned here.
My story is 5,556 words long and around 11 pages, but it's such an enticing and easy read (I think) that it won't feel that long. It's just exploring different fetishes in a creative and light fashion. It's mostly a teaser, as there is no sex and no seriously intense sexual climax, though someone might get off from a spot here or there.
I just want overall critique and sentence fluency, grammatical, and mechanical error edits.
I can send it in .rtf (Text Edit) or a .doc (Word 2004) file.
Anyone interested, please PM me.
I can also answer questions here in the thread.
So I have turned here.
My story is 5,556 words long and around 11 pages, but it's such an enticing and easy read (I think) that it won't feel that long. It's just exploring different fetishes in a creative and light fashion. It's mostly a teaser, as there is no sex and no seriously intense sexual climax, though someone might get off from a spot here or there.
I just want overall critique and sentence fluency, grammatical, and mechanical error edits.
I can send it in .rtf (Text Edit) or a .doc (Word 2004) file.
Anyone interested, please PM me.
I can also answer questions here in the thread.
