"Eating Dough" by daughter....a double-entendre treat!

[tigerjen]

Come check out daughter's "Eating Dough"........which I found
to be a double-entendre treat!

link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=27306

A delectable piece of poetry that one must read between
the lines to get the "double-meaning" of cookies! Enjoy!

 

[daughter]

Thanks, TigerJen

TigerJen--

Thanks. Your post is right on time. Just got the old ego bruised.
I'll live.

Peace,

daughter

 

[tigerjen]

good timing!

Hi!
Good timing I suppose......a promotion from me in
regards to a poem of yours is good medicine!

 

[Whispersecret]

If you know me at all, you know I think of myself as intelligent, but I just didn't get the poem at all. I feel like a dunce.

I figured sheet could mean sheet for a bed, but the butter and eggs thing, I just didn't get. I don't know what the morsels are or the cocoa... Am I stupid or naive or both?

 

[daughter]

Whispersecret--

I don't think you're a dunce. Now, I am good for missing a meaning. Look at this in two sections. Her description is literal. She gets items for baking. She returns from the store with the items and hears his message. Her lover is all for cookies especially hers.

Whispersecret, unless you had the misfortune of radical surgery, you have two morsels of your own. And some of us are cocoa colored.

This was written for a writing challenge: Write something kinky using food.

Peace,

daughter

 

[Whispersecret]

I guess I was trying to hard to find the hidden meaning. The meaning wasn't all that hidden. LOL. It's all Tigerjen's fault! LOL. Her post made me think I was missing something. (That's it, shift blame, WS...)

 

[daughter]

WS--

I suspected as much. On my better days, I pen a decent metaphor. I assumed that's what TigerJen meant.

Thanks, friend.

Peace,

daughter