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The Cheeky One
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Cruling out from out of a rocky ledge, Iedos looks out across the desert plans. Seeing the sand move withe wind. "Shai-Hulad! Why have you punished me?"
Iedos colapsed onto his knees. This young man was born of noble blood of the great house Harkonnen, his mother was a Freman. This man had the kindness of the Freman, and he had the temper of a Harkonnen.
His father, Rashan Harkonnen had captrude a couple Fremen women, to which he used for his own pleasure. Iedos was the outcomme of such pleasure, and because of his Fremen side, he was tossed aside by the Harkonnens. Made out as a freak by his own father. Ieos went to the desert planet, the home of the Fremen, the only planet in the Imperium with the Spice. The planet was Arrakis, also knwen as Dune.
The Fremen banished Iedos when they learnet of his Harkonnen blood. The Fremen hated the Harkonnens for good reasons to, but to Iedos, there was no reason good enough to be punished like this. Being left ut in the burning desert, with only a Stil-suit, even that wasn't enough to help him reach a Village. Crossing the sands this far south was sucide. With the huge Sandworms waiting to attack anything that moves on the serfice.
Iedos, being out cast not only by the Harkonnens, but also by the Fremen. Having no where to go, and nothing todo, Iedos made his way down the Cliff, and walked out to the desert. Fulling to his knees and raising his arms up to the sun., he yells out: "Shai-Hulad! Take me!"
Then there was a moment of silance, only the gosh of the winds could be heard. Suddenly, the ground started to shake, and a rumble could be heard, coming closer, and closer to Iedos. "Here it comes!" He thinks to him self. Standing up, he watches the shifting send as the Sandworm comes closer. With a loud roar, the sands split apart and a big mouth of a Sandworm comes out of the ground.
Looking at the Sandworm, Iedos swollows hard. "Maker! Here I am!" he yells out at the Sandworm as it comes closer with speed.
With out warning, a woman grabs Iedos from behinde and drags him into a flying craft. The flapping wings move faster, and the craft lefts of the ground leaving a huge Sandworm on the ground. Iedos watches out the window of the craft as the Sandworm dives into the sand.
"What in names where you doing down there? Trying to killl yourself?!" The woman asks with a slight touch of angue in her voice.
Iedos, sitting back, he looks at the woman. She is hiding her face away in that robe, so Iedos couldn't see her face. "What is it to you?" What do you care of what happens to a freak. Look ladie, I don't even know who you are. I would thank you for saving my life, but you didn't do me any favours."
"What do I car?" She asks as she puts her hands on the top of the robe covering her face. "Since when was it a crime for a muther to worry about her son?" She spoke as she pulled down the robe, letting her face be seen.
"Mother? Who could this be? I thought the Harkonnens had killed you?" Iedos asks in confusion. "I was outcast by the Harkonnens, then by thre Frem.........." He was stoped in midsentice by his mother.
"Iedos, I know about all of what happend." Looking into her son's red eyes, she continues. "I thought your eyes would be Blue, like the Fremen, instead they glow red." Looking away from her son. "It must be the Harkonnen blood." Looking out the window, she starts to talk again. "After you were born, your father shiped us of to some prison. He sent me to prison for having his child. Anyways, you grow up and affter your 12 birthday your father came and toke me away with him. He put my on his Frigate, and sent me to some backwater planet on the edge of the Imperium. It would have cost him greatly to get a Guild Highliner to go out so far. Ever since, I have found ways to keepp an eye on you, waiting to go back and get you. But I could not go back to the planet Gedi Prime. So when I heard of your father sending you to Dune, I knew that was what I was waiting for."
Looking at his mother, he speaks. "My eyes started to glow red, and then my father started beating me, he even got his Mantat to watch. It was the eyes what sent him over the edge. As I grow older, my eyes started to glow even more. Then I started to object to how he treaited the slaves. That's when he bansed me to Dune." Looking away from his mother to hide a tear in his eye, he went on. "I found my way to a Fremen Shitch, they accepted me, untill I told them of my father. Then they to kicked me out. That' is how I came to be where I was when you found me."
Cruling out from out of a rocky ledge, Iedos looks out across the desert plans. Seeing the sand move withe wind. "Shai-Hulad! Why have you punished me?"
Iedos colapsed onto his knees. This young man was born of noble blood of the great house Harkonnen, his mother was a Freman. This man had the kindness of the Freman, and he had the temper of a Harkonnen.
His father, Rashan Harkonnen had captrude a couple Fremen women, to which he used for his own pleasure. Iedos was the outcomme of such pleasure, and because of his Fremen side, he was tossed aside by the Harkonnens. Made out as a freak by his own father. Ieos went to the desert planet, the home of the Fremen, the only planet in the Imperium with the Spice. The planet was Arrakis, also knwen as Dune.
The Fremen banished Iedos when they learnet of his Harkonnen blood. The Fremen hated the Harkonnens for good reasons to, but to Iedos, there was no reason good enough to be punished like this. Being left ut in the burning desert, with only a Stil-suit, even that wasn't enough to help him reach a Village. Crossing the sands this far south was sucide. With the huge Sandworms waiting to attack anything that moves on the serfice.
Iedos, being out cast not only by the Harkonnens, but also by the Fremen. Having no where to go, and nothing todo, Iedos made his way down the Cliff, and walked out to the desert. Fulling to his knees and raising his arms up to the sun., he yells out: "Shai-Hulad! Take me!"
Then there was a moment of silance, only the gosh of the winds could be heard. Suddenly, the ground started to shake, and a rumble could be heard, coming closer, and closer to Iedos. "Here it comes!" He thinks to him self. Standing up, he watches the shifting send as the Sandworm comes closer. With a loud roar, the sands split apart and a big mouth of a Sandworm comes out of the ground.
Looking at the Sandworm, Iedos swollows hard. "Maker! Here I am!" he yells out at the Sandworm as it comes closer with speed.
With out warning, a woman grabs Iedos from behinde and drags him into a flying craft. The flapping wings move faster, and the craft lefts of the ground leaving a huge Sandworm on the ground. Iedos watches out the window of the craft as the Sandworm dives into the sand.
"What in names where you doing down there? Trying to killl yourself?!" The woman asks with a slight touch of angue in her voice.
Iedos, sitting back, he looks at the woman. She is hiding her face away in that robe, so Iedos couldn't see her face. "What is it to you?" What do you care of what happens to a freak. Look ladie, I don't even know who you are. I would thank you for saving my life, but you didn't do me any favours."
"What do I car?" She asks as she puts her hands on the top of the robe covering her face. "Since when was it a crime for a muther to worry about her son?" She spoke as she pulled down the robe, letting her face be seen.
"Mother? Who could this be? I thought the Harkonnens had killed you?" Iedos asks in confusion. "I was outcast by the Harkonnens, then by thre Frem.........." He was stoped in midsentice by his mother.
"Iedos, I know about all of what happend." Looking into her son's red eyes, she continues. "I thought your eyes would be Blue, like the Fremen, instead they glow red." Looking away from her son. "It must be the Harkonnen blood." Looking out the window, she starts to talk again. "After you were born, your father shiped us of to some prison. He sent me to prison for having his child. Anyways, you grow up and affter your 12 birthday your father came and toke me away with him. He put my on his Frigate, and sent me to some backwater planet on the edge of the Imperium. It would have cost him greatly to get a Guild Highliner to go out so far. Ever since, I have found ways to keepp an eye on you, waiting to go back and get you. But I could not go back to the planet Gedi Prime. So when I heard of your father sending you to Dune, I knew that was what I was waiting for."
Looking at his mother, he speaks. "My eyes started to glow red, and then my father started beating me, he even got his Mantat to watch. It was the eyes what sent him over the edge. As I grow older, my eyes started to glow even more. Then I started to object to how he treaited the slaves. That's when he bansed me to Dune." Looking away from his mother to hide a tear in his eye, he went on. "I found my way to a Fremen Shitch, they accepted me, untill I told them of my father. Then they to kicked me out. That' is how I came to be where I was when you found me."
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