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ProbablyInsane
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How much is too much? Specifically:
This is less than 700 words in. Will the average reader just dip when hitting that wall of French?
For context, this is a surrealist PWP that'll drop into Erotic Couplings. Pretty sure most readers won't finish it, but I'd like to mitigate back arrow spamming. I mean, the opening lines (below) are a little out there for the casual Lit reader, so... ya lol
It's nothing but a piece of fun, silly writing. Just curious how the Lit experts think this might go
Or do I bask in the radiance of leur amour, ma petite amie imaginaire, la femme de mon monde? C’est vrai. C’est vrai. Je la désire, alors viens à moi.
This is less than 700 words in. Will the average reader just dip when hitting that wall of French?
For context, this is a surrealist PWP that'll drop into Erotic Couplings. Pretty sure most readers won't finish it, but I'd like to mitigate back arrow spamming. I mean, the opening lines (below) are a little out there for the casual Lit reader, so... ya lol
All I see is nothingness. The void, the expanse. The abyss, the depths. The litany and the cacophony and the eruption of electric nothingness, a testament to the almighty power of absence.
It's nothing but a piece of fun, silly writing. Just curious how the Lit experts think this might go