Drive!

[suziesdad]

Have an idea for a story featuring a seven-person orgy(six women, one guy!) in the back of a stretch limo. two cougars involved, four twenty-somethings and a hot young driver, lesbian also.
Does anybody have any ideas on how to make it work?

 

[lovecraft68]

That's ambitious.

My first thought before I would even try to envision the endless positions and switching positions and for lack of a better term "logistics" is this.

With 7 people and six being female here is the inherent issue.

Who is "she"? there are 6 shes in this set up so there would be way too much confusion, "she began sucking on her nipple, while her hand strayed behind her to find Lisa's pussy...."

You're going to have to use the first names a lot and that can get annoying

Brandy released a long moan as Karen's talented tongue caressed her swollen clit. Behind her Melanie continued to finger Katie while getting a moan inducing rimjob from Allison, who was still perched on Joe's cock, riding him slowly, while Jen licked his balls from her position kneeling on the floor.

Too many names, too many people and sexual parts and limbs and sounds.

I did that for a couple of sentences, but to keep that up for an entire scene would get to the point of being more tedious than fun.
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It can be done, but by someone a lot more ambitious than me.

As for just a personal opinion? A video like this would not interest me. Group sex can be hot, but even in a movie too many people is too distracting and takes a away from the fun. You're spending too much time tracking who is doing what rather than concentrating on what's in front of you

I think that would be even more hard to follow in written word.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Short version of what LC said, orgies work fine on camera when you don't actually have to keep track of who's who but on paper it tends to be a hot mess.

 

[Carnevil9]

Unless you don't bother to keep track of who's who. Make it from the dude's POV, and all he knows is here's a pussy, there's a pussy, everywhere's a pussy. Or a tit or a mouth or a cute pink puckered asshole.

Another option is to give each of the women some physical characteristic to set them apart. "Bob watched Bambi's blonde ponytail bobbing up and down as her mouth rose and fell on his cock. Jasmine's nut-brown skin contrasted nicely with Inga's milky white body as they locked in embrace. Jasmine's long blue fingernails traced circles around her hardening nipples as she licked her pouty lips....." Eventually you can drop the names altogether.

And of course the title of the story would have to be "Sex Drive."

 

[Tmmldr]

Have an idea for a story featuring a seven-person orgy(six women, one guy!) in the back of a stretch limo. two cougars involved, four twenty-somethings and a hot young driver, lesbian also.
Does anybody have any ideas on how to make it work?

The six women paired off immediately, stripped and began making out.

Jake was forgotten.

 

[lovecraft68]

The six women paired off immediately, stripped and began making out.

Jake was forgotten.

add in one of the women was his wife and he was tied and forced to watch and it can go into Loving wives.