Dressing up as a schoolgirl - is it allowed on Lit

[Biker_Faerie]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

 

[drobert44]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

If in 20's, why not? I have dated adult sissies who dress like that.

 

[litfan10]

I believe age play doesn't break the underage rule just make it clear everybody is an adult.

 

[Mastered_again]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

It better be, or I've just wasted 8k words. And she still hasn't had sex yet.

But, yeah it is

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Dressing up, sure. Acting younger in a knowing fashion that's clearly age play, yes.

Just so happens that the entire character acts like a 14yo throughout, but they're in their 20s honest? Yeah, right. Could well be refused, or removed if someone reports it.

I recently wrote age play with a character in her 30s dressed as a schoolgirl but treated as 18, because it wasn't necessary for the story to have her act or be treated as younger (Bad Brat Girl).

 

[litfan10]

It better be, or I've just wasted 8k words. And she still hasn't had sex yet.

But, yeah it is

8k and no sex....sheesh talk about foreplay.

 

[pink_silk_glove]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

MelissaBaby wrote a story in a strip club where one of the dancing girls wore a school girl outfit, swingin' on a pole 'n everything. So if you want precedent, there ya go.

8k and no sex....sheesh talk about foreplay.

The story that I'm currently working on goes close to 10k before anyone sees a titty.

 

[mildlyaroused]

My latest is 16k words before we get to any titties

I haven't written any of it for over a week ooopss

 

[lovecraft68]

Its fine as long as you establish, she's at least 18 which in that example, well, she is a school girl

When writing a woman who's older and doing it for a role play or to look sexy, then be sure you don't have her start speaking like she's a little girl, that could raise a flag, but just the outfit is fine.

 

[Mastered_again]

8k and no sex....sheesh talk about foreplay.

Actually it's role play in public

 

[jaF0]

Its fine as long as you establish, she's at least 18 which in that example, well, she is a school girl

When writing a woman who's older and doing it for a role play or to look sexy, then be sure you don't have her start speaking like she's a little girl, that could raise a flag, but just the outfit is fine.

I knew someone with serious mental issues. Real Life Sybill if you will. The little girl voice would come out along with the walk and other mannerisms. For a person in their 40s, raising flags? Oh yeah!! What came later was Steven King stuff.

 

[jaF0]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

Emphasize heels. Five or six inch, even call out the stilleto aspect. Not only will it draw in the shoe fans, but it will take away the age issue. Also stockings rather than knee socks. Most younger girls wouldn't really wear them. An adult playing up the fetish aspect would.

Avoid the flat Mary Janes as the people who get into that area more seriously seek out things adults would usually not wear.

 

[lovecraft68]

I knew someone with serious mental issues. Real Life Sybill if you will. The little girl voice would come out along with the walk and other mannerisms. For a person in their 40s, raising flags? Oh yeah!! What came later was Steven King stuff.

I have an erotic horror novel where the woman had two additional personalities. One was a seductive stone cold killer, the other stuck at 6 years old because its when trauma caused her initial mental break with reality. The personalities alternate from minute to minute meaning the little girl pops in during scenes of sex and violence and serves as dark comedy in many instances.

It could never fly here.

 

[ElectricBlue]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

Portray her as an eighteen year old senior school student and you'll get by. Portray her as a young teen, you won't. It doesn't matter what age disclaimers you bolt on or build into the story, it's how you portray the character that counts.

 

[Bamagan]

I'm contemplating a story line in an ongoing series where my character (who is in her twenties) dresses up as a schoolgirl. Is that allowed?

Certain aspects of ageplay will get a story rejected. The dressing up part by itself shouldn't be a problem, but if either of the characters roleplays being under 18, or uses language to suggest the same, it will probably get rejected.

 

[jaF0]

I counted five, maybe six distinct different personas. If you were paying attention, you could see it happen. A pause, or freeze, a blank stare. At first it might have seemed like an act, but too much changed. Tone of voice, manner of speech, vocabulary, cadence of step and other body motions.

One was a turn of the century Cajun Hooker. Another was a little girl, but was never able to pick out an age. The others were less severe but still different from the normal person.

Freeky with a capital EEEEEE.

 

[jaF0]

Portray her as an eighteen year old senior school student and you'll get by. Portray her as a young teen, you won't. It doesn't matter what age disclaimers you bolt on or build into the story, it's how you portray the character that counts.

I have a picture somewhere that I found on the web. Obviously mid-to-late twenties, but in the classic private school garb, plaid pleated skirt, preppy shirt and sweater, ankle socks and very high heels. She's standing on a porch knocking on a door. No idea what the back story was or why the picture was taken, but it evoked the image of call girl playing the role and arriving at a client's home.

 

[TheRedChamber]

As others have said, there's a line. My story got bounced for this even though the main characters are established clearly as 35 and 29 with children of their own.

The smile vanished from Bakul's face. She placed a finger on Joanne's nose. “Look, this sad old divorcee act is getting a little tiring. You need to have a little more self-confidence. Either you start believing that you're just as beautiful and sexy as I am and the age difference is largely irrelevant or I put my hair in pig-tails and start pretending I have mummy issues.”

Joanne reached for the bedside table. “Fine. I've got a couple of hairbands right here.”

Bakul paused. “What, seriously? You're only seven years older than me.”

Then a couple of 'mummys' in the sex talk later on even though it's mainly piss-taking. I had to rewrite with a 'mistress' theme. In fairness, I was asking for trouble as I tagged it 'ageplay' without thinking.

 

[Ssbbw4u1974]

I write a lot of Daddy/babygirl stories because that's my kink/fetish.
In all my stories, I wrote a disclaimer on the story, and in the special notes section to admin/mods that all characters or persons are 18+.
I've not had a story rejected yet.

 

[SimonDoom]

It shouldn't be a problem unless the female character is described in a way and behaves in a way that it feels like the author is trying to get away with presenting a sexy character that is for all intents and purposes under 18. If it's really clear that she's in her 20s it shouldn't be a problem.

 

[gunhilltrain]

It better be, or I've just wasted 8k words. And she still hasn't had sex yet.

But, yeah it is

If it doesn't fly here, put it on another site. There are at least two which will take it.

 

[Mastered_again]

If it doesn't fly here, put it on another site. There are at least two which will take it.

Not to worry, the age issue is addressed in two ways. First in my continuing saga of Linda & George, being in their twenties was clearly established. Moreover, there is a direct reference to her age in this particular chapter, part of the overall scenario of their role playing, but I don't want to issue a spoiler alert. You'll have to read it to find out (hint, hint), once it's published - at least they're up to having sex now, so the story submission should be within the next week.

 

[Astrotrain]

It shouldn't be a problem unless the female character is described in a way and behaves in a way that it feels like the author is trying to get away with presenting a sexy character that is for all intents and purposes under 18. If it's really clear that she's in her 20s it shouldn't be a problem.

I got away with a character like that. I said she had just turned 18 but growing up in isolation made her much more immature and prone to throwing tantrums when she didn't get her way. I also said it had affected her fashion sense and she nearly always wore short pleated skirts and kept her hair in pigtails. It might have been because she was a bratty domme who was playfully teasing and sadistic unlike the submissive (bratty or not) person the sexy schoolgirl archetype usually stands for.