Drawn in the Pool of Deciet

shalona

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I have a story in mind that includes several people.

I want to ask that you are a daily visitor when thinking about joining in.

There are seven main people involved in this little scam.

First: Lord Rathdoran: This man is almost seventy with a new heart. It is his desire to get a divorce from his current wife and marry his cute little thing that is pregnant with his son. He has no other heirs to his fortune either but is reasonable for his deceased sister's daughter who has a very percarious nature and ailment that needs to be secreted away from the public.

Next: Lady Rathdoran: She is in her middle forties and very stern on manners. She knows about her husband's infidality but refuses to let him off. She wears black and has dark hair with Spanish ancestory. She does however like the bulter and has been known to chase him with whips on rare drunken moments.

Chaton: The butler, he also is in his middle forties and finds himself caught between loyalties. Though never given a threat of loss of his job he likes to flaunt a romantic adventure with Lady Rathdoran. He is a slender man and very timid around other men.

Seinna: The cute young thing. She is 19 and expecting the Lord's heir. She presently is homeless due to the fire of her apartment. Turning to Lord Rathdoran for some help, he suggests that she stay with him in his 20 bedroom mansion. ( this is my role in the story)

Loretta Rathdoran: the neice, she is 30 and has a unique ailment that pops up at odd times, she is often either in her room or moves about in a wheelchair. (Pm me and I will tell you about her ailment). She does tend to attract men that are abusive or plain lusty louts.

Berton Willis: The attorney for Lord Rathdoran. He is full of advice, including the one where Lord Rathdoran merely put his wife in check and force her to accept the invedientable or just chain her to the walls and turn her into the slut that she really is. Berton is aware that Lord Rathdoran is a dom in a quiet way.

Feliza: This is a woman that likes to uncover stories and is the first to start a rumor. She is good friends with Lady Rathdoran and also hints at her feminine perferences.

I hope that I can get some interested parties and hope that you enjoy as you read along.
 
Pool of Deceit

Sounds interesting - Id like to play and PMing with ferryrider he wants to play too

He could fill the bill the the Lord - what part are you going to play?

I'll be one of the ladies - whatever part you dont want.
 
Hi,

If you need Feliza, I would try to be erotically fem oriented. Love mysteries and I could work on my gossiping! :)

LMK

Margaret
 
I have never played one of these before but i would love to try it:D
Berton Willis sounded like a role i would like to play:)
well let me know then
 
All are welcome but as I suggested that all visit daily as things happen very quickly and am after the realism in the overall story.

Welcome to those that dropped in.

I am playing Lord Rathdoran's cute young thing...Seinna

Plainjane you have the choice between Lord Rathdoran's wife or neice.

Marg_mom welcome as Feliza, you sound ideal for the part already

horny_boi welcome as the attorney at law..Berton Willis. You certainly will need the practice ( hahaha.. sorry couldn't resist the pun)

I am hoping that we can get started on Monday if not soonerjust need a few more guys and a girl...
 
Great - I'll be the neice Loretta. Please tell me about her "ailment" (besides constant horniness that is)
 
Hi shalona,

I'll take Chaton if he is still available and I will check at least daily for story changes and will post as needed. Thanks...
 
Welcome Chaton... :kiss:

I have read your story in the pioneering days and like it so far.

We need two more people and then we are ready. Shalona
 
Okay I have a wife from Lord R

is everyone still willing to play the parts? Write me in Pm please
 
Bump/Casting Call

Bump from the butler, we still need a Lord and a Lady. Sign up now!
 
Starting off Drawn into the Pool of Deceit

Three months with one man and finding out that he is married made her feel strange and the fact that he was old enough to be her grandfather didn't matter. She found his friendship welcome when her family left for the long vacation. She reflected his comfort when the plane that her parents were on crashed.

Lord Rathdoran was one man that seemed far younger then he should and she was by his side when he had his new heart transplant. She felt horrid that his attack came after her news of the positive pregnancy test. His colapse at the clinic was the worst thing she could have anticipated.

While staying close at hand to her lover, one of the tenants in her complex fell asleep while smoking and poof her life became more tangled as she lost everything except the clothes on her back, school books for her GED, and purse.

She spent four days with the insurance to discover that what was covered thur the company didn't cover to replace anything. She merely received the 87 dollars that she paid them to open the account. Depressed she sits quietly in the chair by his bed and looks at the vast ocean of apartment listings. She heart goes more towards the child that she carries and its father as she rests her hand on his and cat naps.

Her smiling face was the first thing that he saw when he awoke and then the news about her complex blared over the news. So much for not having him find out.. she thought as she kissed his lips and caressed his cheek with her face.

"I'm so glad that you are okay." Seinna admitted.
 
Lady Rathdoran

( Hope first person is okay.. never got the hang of third)

I wasn't happy about the rumors about my husband's affair nor was I thrilled to catch her at his bedside at the hospital. It agravated me to have the hospital staff think it was my daughter that was resting in the chair at his bedside.

I returned home and drank several glasses of burboun to forget the young girl that was there in his room. It made me madder that she was young and pretty like I once was when I attracted my present husband who had the gall to serve me with papers. Over his dead body.. I think hotly as I gulp down glass number four.

Right about now the room seems different and the man at the door saying something seems familiar. I grab the nearest weapon and hurl it at him. I am out for blood and in a drunken rage!
 
Chaton

Chaton knocked lightly at the door to the lounge and entered. "Lady Rathdoran..", he began, then ducked as one of her heels flew through the air towards him.

Lady Rathdoran was reaching for the other shoe to throw, when Chaton said loudly, "Lady Rathdoran... Lady Rathdoran... Mistress!" He finally got through to her and she stoppped reaching for the shoe.

"Chaton, my darling", Lady Rathdoran blurted out and began to cry. Chaton rushed over to her and took her in his arms, comforting her.
 
"That lout that jackass! How dare he flant that tramp there in the hospital!" Anger made a fluent list of profanities in Spanish flow from the bourbon kissed lips.

"She's a young thing too," Feeling even sorrier for myself, and looking at the one that is in front of me. "Why should I say anything to you.----- You are a man! Damned selfless arrogant---pigheaded---- " Slipping into a deeper mood of depression comes with some tears and a louder voice. "I AM THE WIFE OF SOMEONE THAT HAS POWER! I REFUSE TO GIVE UP MY RIGHTFUL PLACE TO THAT TRAMP!!"

Letting his hold be of some minor comfort I think of ways to regain my honor. I push him away and glance around for something else. "WANT TO CHASE A YOUNGER SKIRT!!! DO YOU???" I was ready for blood now as I grabbed that bullwhip that my husband has on the wall from one of his old wild and wooly days and I can crack it to inflict some pretty deep gashes and I was aiming at the man in the room.
 
Chaton

Chaton sees Lady Rathdoran going for the bull whip, after she pushed him away. He ran towards the door, being hit as he opened it.

The whip cut a four inch gash in the shoulder of his coat and drew blood. Chaton ran out in the hallway pursued by his Mistress. She was yelling and cracking the whip.

Chaton managed to avoid further damage for the moment, although he couldn't say the same for the knic-knacs and paintings in the hallway.

She finally cornered him in the kitchen. Chaton hid behind the fat, Spanish cook, holding her from behind. Lady Rathdoran got disgusted and threw down the whip.

Chaton let go of the cook when the whip was thrown down, only to be hit by the angry cook.
 
It was a shame that he fled to the kitchen for there are so many other objests to use to do damage. Like knives and pots and pans.

I hurled one over the cook's head and banged Chaton in the forehead. Then I noticed that he wasn't quite the right build for my husband and crumpled to the floor crying again. Humility is not my forte and even more my drunk was taking a good hold on my reaction response.

"Just take me to bed, Chaton. I'm so tired of fighting with his assship.." I murrmered as my eyes rolled back. "Did I ever tell you that I loved him once.. like a wallowing bitch! I loved him."

I barely notice anything next other then the kiss that I placed on two lips and the phrase "Yo amora usted... mi amor"
 
Chaton

Chaton rushed to Lady Rathdoran's aid after she collapsed. He ignored the bump on his forehead. He kissed her then carried her to her bedroom.

Lady and Lord Rathdoran had not slept in the same bed for years. Not in the same room for years, either.

Chaton tucked her in and kissed her again. She was very lovely. She didn't look her age and there was a classic beauty about her.

Chaton apologized to the cook (she hit him again) and returned the whip to it's place in the lounge.
 
The new day makes things look better unless you are suffering from a hang over and believe me I was suffering as I rested against the cool feeling porcelian of the toilet, heaving up the reminents of my last meal.

"HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO ME!" I yelled at my reflection then moaned as my own voice gave me another pain.
 
Lord Rathdoran:

"Sienna," he says in low and husky dry voice, "how are you my sweet lil girl?

"It seems I've survived the operation, haven't I my sweet?" he says with a little smile up at her as his hand finds hers on the bed and gives it a squeeze.
 
"I am feeling much better now that you are awake. I've been here most of the week since your colapse. I'm so sorry that I made you.." a few tears trickled from her eyes as her love for him showed and she squeezed his hand with a brighting smile.

"Yes you did wonderfully with the surgery, m'love." Seinna debated on whether she should tell him about her new predicament but waited since she wanted him to be stronger before getting another shocker.

"Just think a week you might get to go home." She hugged him gently as her tears dribbled down her cheeks.
 
Getting up and trying to refresh myself I decide to go visit my dear darling husband again. After all there are appearences that have to be upkept.

I holler for the help but as usual they are doing other things. So I scream loudly for the butler. " CHATON! "

Then I wait for him to appear and take me over to the hospital to see my husband and mostly to get rid of that little tramp that was sitting by his bedside. I can't let the socail page get wind of this....... I'd be ruined for sure.
 
Lady Rathdoran:

"A whole week Sienna?
"Now that I'm to live longer and have a new heart, I'm not sure I can go that long withour your tender ministrations my little one. How shall I survive without feeling your lips on me, without feeling the wet heat and tight grip as you ride me for an entire week?" he says with a smile and wicked wink and gleam in his pale blue eyes.


OOC: May I ask that we put our character's names in the subject line to aid my poor auld memory. *s
 
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Bert had spent several hours on the phone, making sure all of the paperwork was in order. Since he had been taken on by Lord Ratharon full time, he's never had so much work to do. Money was being put in several places, and contracts always came up.
Now, with his new medical operation, and him under the weather for a couple of weeks, at least, Willis had been running around like a chicken with his head cut off.
It wasn't easy to get everything done. He finally relaxed at the end of the day, getting home and seeing to a nice warm bath.
Tomorrow he'd go visit his boss, not business, just send him a gift basket, and tell him things are going all right. They are, for the most part, no big disasters...
As of yet.
Still, one can never be too careful.
 
Chaton

Chaton heard Lady Rathdoran scream his name. He quickly ran to see what she wanted.

She didn't look too sexy hung-over like she was, but Chaton loved her anyway. She wanted to go to the hospital, so Chaton rang up the chauffeur and told him to bring the car.

Chaton looked his Mistress deep in her bloodshot eyes and and asked, "Do you want me to accompany you Madame?"
 
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