Downandouts and tramps

kramm

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I love fantasising about my wife being fucked and abused by dirty, rough downandouts. It's sick I know but I love imagining her eating their asses, drinking their piss and of course eating their cum which could be on their clothes or from the floor. Better still it could take place in some filthy toilets.
She knows all about my desires and has in the past written some of her own. I just need to persuade her to be little more dirty. I did read a few once on here any ideas where?
 
I wrote one a few weeks ago titled Down and Out. It was in the reluctance category. If memory serves me correctly it was my first post as I thought it was kind of a crappy story. Surprisingly it did well on here. It's dropped a bit in the ratings, but is still at 4.5 or better.

That leads me to believe that you are not alone in liking this sort of stuff. My story was not quite so harsh as the stuff you mentioned, but the basic premise was that a young rich woman ended up having sex with a homeless man. It was a story of contrast, rich versus poor, pretty versus ugly, young versus old. In the end she discovers that her needs were satisfied by the very men she was NOT suppose to date.

Check the story out. I think you will like it.

Down and Out
 
Deadwood is too modest. His story is excellent.

I also saw another good variation a couple of years ago. I looke under the obvious terms, but didn't find it. I'll look again later and post a link if I locate it.
 
maybe post a link or two of the ones you liked, for other visitors?
 
sirhugs said:
Deadwood is too modest. His story is excellent.

I also saw another good variation a couple of years ago. I looke under the obvious terms, but didn't find it. I'll look again later and post a link if I locate it.

Thanks for the kind words Sirhugs. I really don't consider that story my best work, but the great thing about ratings is, sometimes it surprises you. I think most of us write erotica for ourselves and then share it with the world. I got to get better at thinking about what the readers want before I sit down to a story and write it.
 
Deadwood said:
Thanks for the kind words Sirhugs. I really don't consider that story my best work, but the great thing about ratings is, sometimes it surprises you. I think most of us write erotica for ourselves and then share it with the world. I got to get better at thinking about what the readers want before I sit down to a story and write it.

well, I started as a reader. I never wrote 'for myself'. I wrote to give back to Lit, which depends on volunteer contributions. The feedback and comments and votes merely kept me going after the first set.
 
Excellent story Deadwood.

I also like this idea. I have read a couple under this scenario and most have been lame or too unbelievable or just badly written. I've had a couple of ideas in the past, but can't seem to get a good opening for the story.
 
Reshbod said:
Excellent story Deadwood.

I also like this idea. I have read a couple under this scenario and most have been lame or too unbelievable or just badly written. I've had a couple of ideas in the past, but can't seem to get a good opening for the story.


Oh I agree. These stories are very challenging to write. In my story Down and Out I struggled with a plot in which the young woman brought the homeless man home. In the end she blurted out that she would cook for him. But come on. Would a real wealthy woman make such an offer to person of that caliber? Even if it was in the heat of an argument I really doubt that would happen, but I left that scenerio in the story as it was the only plausable thing I could come up with.

As I said, these stories are very challenging to write. Still since there seems some genuine interest in them, maybe I'll see what other stories I can come up with. I am always in the mood for a challenge.
 
Reshbod said:
Excellent story Deadwood.

I also like this idea. I have read a couple under this scenario and most have been lame or too unbelievable or just badly written. I've had a couple of ideas in the past, but can't seem to get a good opening for the story.


I find openings easy. Personally, I like to open with dialogue, midstream sorta, introduce the protagonist, a bit of backstory, some tittilation, some action, a bit more back story, some sex,, more narrative, more sex, more backstory or narrative, the big finish....

Feel free to try this opening :

"Ewww, did you see how gross he was?" my wife asked, pointing to a dishevelled creature opoking through the dumpster outside the restaurant.

"But he might clean up to have a giant cock," I teased. My wife had a thing for fucking strangers with huge cocks. It was fine by me as long as I got to watch. But I must admit a perverse thrill in pushing her to fuck someone disgusting. We had just had three bottles of wine with dinner, and alcohol always makes her extra horny.

"The parking lot is pretty dark," I said, " I bet you could fuck him up against that dumpster and no one would ever notice."


You can modify it to fit your plot idea, or if it doesn't fit, maybe it wil get the creativity flowing....
 
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Deadwood said:
Oh I agree. These stories are very challenging to write. In my story Down and Out I struggled with a plot in which the young woman brought the homeless man home. In the end she blurted out that she would cook for him. But come on. Would a real wealthy woman make such an offer to person of that caliber? Even if it was in the heat of an argument I really doubt that would happen, but I left that scenerio in the story as it was the only plausable thing I could come up with.

As I said, these stories are very challenging to write. Still since there seems some genuine interest in them, maybe I'll see what other stories I can come up with. I am always in the mood for a challenge.

would a really wealthy woman cook? Don't they have people who do that?
 
Deadwood said:
Oh I agree. These stories are very challenging to write. In my story Down and Out I struggled with a plot in which the young woman brought the homeless man home. In the end she blurted out that she would cook for him. But come on. Would a real wealthy woman make such an offer to person of that caliber? Even if it was in the heat of an argument I really doubt that would happen, but I left that scenerio in the story as it was the only plausable thing I could come up with.

As I said, these stories are very challenging to write. Still since there seems some genuine interest in them, maybe I'll see what other stories I can come up with. I am always in the mood for a challenge.


I agree. The story I have played with off and on involves an middle to upper middle class wife/young college girl etc. who volunteers to help at a homeless shelter or takes it upon herself to help someone she sees going through the trash or whatever. At first he is meek and appreciative, but when he gets the chance he exerts his "power" over her. Like with your story she does give in, reluctantly, mainly because I really dislike rape or violent stories. While with your story, it seemed a bit short and things happened very quickly, I was still able to suspend disbelief and accept it as happening.
 
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Now I feel like and idiot because I just posted a new thread with this very topic. Has anyone found any more stories like this?
 
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