JUDO
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- Joined
- May 1, 2001
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Hi-
Just wrote a fun little poem. Ran into something called "Double Dactyls" on another site and had a lot of fun writing one.
Then I thought, well what the hell, use the form to tell a little longer story. Please check out "The Ballad of Lady MacAllister."
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=38063
It's a little tale composed of eight double dactyls (although one of them is a cheat of course).
(Sorry, RW, I made the durn title before your cool BALLAD post. It's not really a ballad of any kind.)
Having fun.

- Judo
PS - If you guys think this might make a decent Poetry Bootcamp form, let me know and I'll post links to form, etc. with examples.
Just wrote a fun little poem. Ran into something called "Double Dactyls" on another site and had a lot of fun writing one.
Then I thought, well what the hell, use the form to tell a little longer story. Please check out "The Ballad of Lady MacAllister."
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=38063
It's a little tale composed of eight double dactyls (although one of them is a cheat of course).
(Sorry, RW, I made the durn title before your cool BALLAD post. It's not really a ballad of any kind.)
Having fun.
- Judo
PS - If you guys think this might make a decent Poetry Bootcamp form, let me know and I'll post links to form, etc. with examples.