Dotti

[Guest]

As a new writer, I would like some feedback on the Dotti stories.

R. Neal

 

[Cherry Girl]

R. Neal... I am being 100% honest when I say that your stories are an absolute joy to read!!! Each day I come here hoping that another will have been added. I thoroughly enjoy the close-knit family you have brought to life with so much heart. I wish I could put my finger on what it is I like about them, but I can't. What I DO know is that I LOVE the trivial things about your stories as much as I love the "action". The whole shibang captures my undivided attention... the vitamins Brandy sets out for Dan, as well as the loving lunches she prepares for him, and of course, all the talk about the pads and the oils and stuff. I love that no matter what, Dan's heart belongs to Brandy. Dotti herself is so innocent and yet so alluring with her funny feelings, jumbo clit, and her naivities. The doc is a strange duck, yet amusing, good-natured and appealing. I also adore the dialogue in your works. Goodness, I love them all, ALL your contributions. They are masterpieces in my eyes. I wouldn't have taken the time to post if I were pulling your leg. Please keep writing R. Neal. Between your stories & Kip Carson's, I check back here at literotica more than twice daily, always eager to read your newest written gems. I can't wait 'til Dotti comes home! Oh! And one last thing - a suggestion actually. MORE interaction between Dotti & Brandy. I loved that time Dan saw them in bed together through Dotti's bedroom door. Wow! Hot stuff! R.Neal's #1 fan... Cherry Girl

 

[Crystal]

Well, I have just read all four chapters of Dotti and i have to say that it was a really compelling read and one that has certainly set me on edge. I too like the trivial detail - I feel it makes the story more humble and real. i also really appreciate the amount of love between the characters. Call me boring but love and tenderness turn me on a lot more than "non-consent" and pure lust. One thing that I found was that Dotti's character appeared to be very young, in fact it seemed that she was only about 10. I suspect that this is the truth and that the mention of her being 18 in the preface of Chapter 2 (or was it chapter three?) was just a cover up. This age thing disturbed me a bit but didn't stop me from reading so I don't know quite what that means about me.
Anyway, I did enjoy the story and look forward to the next installment.
Love,
Crystal
xx

 

[R. Neal]

Hello and thanks for your replys. It's nice to know there are other people who believe that love, tenderness, and caring can make a sexual experience more interesting and satisfing. To Cherry Girl, I will look into making the Brandy/Dotti relationship more intimate. To Crystal, as to Dotti's age, It's important to note, she was raised under rather sheltered conditions, steming from Brandy's Island background. In part 6 she meets and gets involved with persons (classmates) outside the home. To all my readers, I'm currently working on parts 7 thru 11. There will be many new characters, and sub-plots developed. For a list of characters and a brief story line, just e-mail me at RNM9999@aol.com.

Thanks again for the kind words. R. Neal

 

[Crystal]

Thanks for posting the next installment - as good as ever (I loved the vaginal muscles rippling over the penis bit!) You've got me hooked I'm afraid - when will it ever end!
Crystal
xx

 

[English Bob]

Absolutely excellent read !! keep up the good work

 

[Cherry Girl]

Thanks R. Neal for making my day yesterday with your latest installment!!! I am SO attached to these characters and hope to be able to read about them for a long time to cum! Sincere gratitude, a pat on the back, and happy holidays to both your family and theirs! (A Christmas "special" would be most scrumptious by the way!) Long live Brandy, Dan, & Dotti!

xo Love Cherry