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athena_by_night

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Well..... I would appreciate if you did and commented. Chapter 9 was just approved...but getting someone to comment on my writing style and technique would be much appreciated..... :nana:
 
windstormy said:
Your wish is my command, oh dear sweet goddess..........

Thank you Billy....you are an angel as always. Sorry I missed this the first go around...you have a great weekend...talk to you soon....

Marie
:)
 
athena_by_night said:
Well..... I would appreciate if you did and commented. Chapter 9 was just approved...but getting someone to comment on my writing style and technique would be much appreciated..... :nana:

Just voted and commented on chapter 9, love. I truly enjoyed it, especially the coupling of Kolya and Natalya. It came as a surprise. A very sweet one. I couldn't help but be taken in by it. I just hope Pyotr will recover soon, for Kolya' sake.
 
dcraig said:
Just voted and commented on chapter 9, love. I truly enjoyed it, especially the coupling of Kolya and Natalya. It came as a surprise. A very sweet one. I couldn't help but be taken in by it. I just hope Pyotr will recover soon, for Kolya' sake.

It's coming...hope you like it.... ;)

Marie
 
athena_by_night said:
Well..... I would appreciate if you did and commented. Chapter 9 was just approved...but getting someone to comment on my writing style and technique would be much appreciated..... :nana:

Well, I guess this would be my very first post in here. Should we possibly celebrate? Lol. I'm being shown the ropes so I'll know what to do and how to do this right. It's kinda fun actually.

Oh, and I RVC'd chapters 7, 8, & 9. I wasn't really sure what to say because all the guys had said it all. But I do love this series you are writing, Marie. It's really good. And I don't really know what else to say, so I'll just stop here. Hope it's okay.
 
DGentleBen said:
Well, I guess this would be my very first post in here. Should we possibly celebrate? Lol. I'm being shown the ropes so I'll know what to do and how to do this right. It's kinda fun actually.

Oh, and I RVC'd chapters 7, 8, & 9. I wasn't really sure what to say because all the guys had said it all. But I do love this series you are writing, Marie. It's really good. And I don't really know what else to say, so I'll just stop here. Hope it's okay.

Ben.....honey..... you can never go wrong with feedback as far as I am concerned.... welcome to the club...and you are very sweet....

Marie
 
DGentleBen said:
Well, I guess this would be my very first post in here. Should we possibly celebrate? Lol. I'm being shown the ropes so I'll know what to do and how to do this right. It's kinda fun actually.

Oh, and I RVC'd chapters 7, 8, & 9. I wasn't really sure what to say because all the guys had said it all. But I do love this series you are writing, Marie. It's really good. And I don't really know what else to say, so I'll just stop here. Hope it's okay.

AND ....ooooooooohhhhhhhh love your name!
 
athena_by_night said:
AND ....ooooooooohhhhhhhh love your name!

Thanks...... :eek:

Was my comment okay? I hope it was. I'm not really sure what to say when everyone's already said it. I do really like your series. And I do hope Pyotr is okay at the end. He seems like such a nice kid. And Kolya seems like he needs someone like him right now. And there's so much twisting and plotting in this series. With Luka and Stephanos working together again. I love that. I think they deserve to work out their differences and get back together. The stephanos keeps messing up with Marianna. That would be me in any situation, I think. But he has a really good friend to hold him up. And his friend has a good woman to goad him into action too. She's almost stealing the spotlight right now. I think she deserves a little recognition too.
 
DGentleBen said:
Thanks...... :eek:

Was my comment okay? I hope it was. I'm not really sure what to say when everyone's already said it. I do really like your series. And I do hope Pyotr is okay at the end. He seems like such a nice kid. And Kolya seems like he needs someone like him right now. And there's so much twisting and plotting in this series. With Luka and Stephanos working together again. I love that. I think they deserve to work out their differences and get back together. The stephanos keeps messing up with Marianna. That would be me in any situation, I think. But he has a really good friend to hold him up. And his friend has a good woman to goad him into action too. She's almost stealing the spotlight right now. I think she deserves a little recognition too.

Your comments are all delightful Gentle Ben.....I love reading them along with everybody else's... and I am glad you are enjoying all the facets of this series and Billy's... you are a peach! (no pun intended!) :p
 
athena_by_night said:

Your comments are all delightful Gentle Ben.....I love reading them along with everybody else's... and I am glad you are enjoying all the facets of this series and Billy's... you are a peach! (no pun intended!) :p

Lmao@you are a peach! (no pun intended!) :p I'll comment as soon as I stop laughing @ that.....
 
DGentleBen said:
I really, really am enjoying your series. I hope you know that. :rose:

Oh..... I know that honey.....and you just made me laugh twice..... you are good medicine! I hope you know that...
 
athena_by_night said:
Oh..... I know that honey.....and you just made me laugh twice..... you are good medicine! I hope you know that...

Wow!! You keep making me blush... :eek: I'm not that handsome in red, really. It's not my color. But I'm starting to know that, yes. :)
 
DGentleBen said:
Wow!! You keep making me blush... :eek: I'm not that handsome in red, really. It's not my color. But I'm starting to know that, yes. :)

lol... red's not my color either! I do much better in softer colors.... but I bet you look nice when you blush........ :nana:
 
athena_by_night said:

lol... red's not my color either! I do much better in softer colors.... but I bet you look nice when you blush........ :nana:

There you go again... :eek: You love teasing me, don't you? ;)
 
athena_by_night said:
oooooooohhhhhhh and with this reply, I hit 100 posts! Do I get a free steak knife set?

I keep going and I'll be experienced before long. I was kinda enjoying my virginity.... LOL!!! :eek: Oops, there I go again....
 
DGentleBen said:
I keep going and I'll be experienced before long. I was kinda enjoying my virginity.... LOL!!! :eek: Oops, there I go again....

lol.... keep this up and you won't be a virgin for long..hee hee hee
 
Matadore said:
Nah, no knives. But you can have an avatar (I think)

Oh! Okay! So, you won't be cutting any steaks with any new knives, but you can bless everyone with your good looks, Marie...... :)
 
athena_by_night said:
thanks, Matadore.... I will have to check that out....

It is in FAQ. I am too busy right now to think about such things, but when the time comes...
 
DGentleBen said:
Oh! Okay! So, you won't be cutting any steaks with any new knives, but you can bless everyone with your good looks, Marie...... :)

So you have seen her?
 
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