Done to death? Part II

[BedtimeStories]

Pussy biting lesbian Vampyres...


Done at all, let alone "to death"?

 

[silverwhisper]

oo...that could be very interesting...although given the size of the respective targets, no reason to keep it to one sex, IMHO. :>

ed

 

[BedtimeStories]

I guess, call it a fetish to make them lesbians. And, instead of an "accidental" blood letting during oral sex, it is the way these Vampyres feed!

 

[silverwhisper]

hey, why even keep it as only blood? what if orgasmic secretions will also do the trick for them? it is, after all, a man or woman's essence, right?

ed

 

[sirhugs]

definitely NOT done to death, IMHO.

 

[BedtimeStories]

hey, why even keep it as only blood? what if orgasmic secretions will also do the trick for them? it is, after all, a man or woman's essence, right?

ed

That is true, too...but would take a very talented writer to "rewrite Vampyric lore"!

 

[BedtimeStories]

definitely NOT done to death, IMHO.

Has it been done at all then?

 

[TheCaptain]

Has it been done at all then?

I'm not too sure... my recommendation to you would be to breeze through this thread on Vampires in general that was on here a whilez back... its pretty good on the whole vamp story ideas subject, I paid particular attention to it when I was considering writing one myself.

Though the whole cumslut vampire thing, at least in the opinions of a couple of Lit-ers in the thread, HAD been done before, though NOT on Lit. Its really up to you whether or not you think rehashing someone else's story CONCEPT is stepping over the line into plaigerism, or even revamping their orig idea.... pun intentional

Cheers, and good luck with whatever way you go with this

Capt

 

[BedtimeStories]

Thanks for that thread, Capt. I'll have to look it over later!

 

[BedtimeStories]

P. S.

Stop picking yer damn nose!

 

[silverwhisper]

that is true, too...but would take a very talented writer to "rewrite vampyric lore"!

bah; as the writer, you create the universe, yes? that means you create the rules whereby things happen. it just takes a bit of attention is all, IMHO. :>

what would be so wrong w/ something like this?

[starts in media res]

she laughed throatily as anne subconsciously reached for her untouched neck. "o no, my succulent little morsel...i have already taken your essence. do you feel that sudden rush of color? that transformation has already begun."

anne recoiled as the crimson of the sheets, the white of the lights, everything began to blaze in her eyes. shielding her eyes with one hand, anne cried, "but i thought it had to be blood? what have you done to me?!"

she laughed again. "foolish little thing: do you believe everything you read? ah, the things we will see together through the centuries, my delightful little morsel."

*****

something like that works, IMHO.

ed

 

[TheCaptain]

Stop picking yer damn nose!

Oh, you love it baby!!!

P.S. to your P.S., return shot - Hey, ran a search on Lit storypage for your stories... hey, where ARE they? What's gonna turn up first, your first story on Lit or Christmas!?!

Not meanin to be mean or anything, trust me I know how hard it is to write... but...

Capt

 

[sirhugs]

Has it been done at all then?

yes.

here is one " Hot" example:

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=112928

very intense, but also romantic- lots of room for other writing approaches.

a search in "Erotic Horror" for "lesbian" turned up 22 total stories, not all similar to your idea.

 

[TheCaptain]

yes.

here is one " Hot" example:

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=112928

very intense, but also romantic- lots of room for other writing approaches.

a search in "Erotic Horror" for "lesbian" turned up 22 total stories, not all similar to your idea.

Oh sirhugs, what WOULD we do without your expert mastery of Lit and all things filthy and depraved?

*bows to the Master

(I'm dead serious with this, no sarcasm intended I swear, scout's honor )

Capt
Quickly going insane from acting the fool on too many forums

 

[BedtimeStories]

she laughed again. "foolish little thing: do you believe everything you read?"

I like the "quote" from the Vampyre!

Now, the question is... If it is the sexual secretions that keeps the Vamps alive, does the human turn if fed apon? Do they have to taste the essence of the Vamp in order to turn? Should some biting occure? Maybe to mix the secretion with the blood? And so on...

 

[BedtimeStories]

Oh, you love it baby!!!

P.S. to your P.S., return shot - Hey, ran a search on Lit storypage for your stories... hey, where ARE they? What's gonna turn up first, your first story on Lit or Christmas!?!

Not meanin to be mean or anything, trust me I know how hard it is to write... but...

Capt

"The Doctor said you (I mean, Ralph!) wouldn't get so many nose bleeds if you kept your finger out of there!" lol

Hey! I'm working on a story! Well, actually, about a dozen...but have been really focusing on one specific one for Sirhugs lately. (And, until today, I've mostly only had time to write when at work! God help me, I don't feel tired right now and would normally be a sleep by now! )

So, don't bet on Christmas!

 

[TheCaptain]

I like the "quote" from the Vampyre!

Now, the question is... If it is the sexual secretions that keeps the Vamps alive, does the human turn if fed apon? Do they have to taste the essence of the Vamp in order to turn? Should some biting occure? Maybe to mix the secretion with the blood? And so on...

Maybe a combination of blood and secretions? *ick* But then you've got the possible turn-off factor... but it IS a vampire story, and blood's probably got to come in there sometime.

Just my opinion... blood and secretions. But your call, you're the writer, and I'm a crackpot

Capt

 

[BedtimeStories]

Just my opinion... blood and secretions. But your call, you're the writer, and I'm a crackpot

Capt

You're a lil' teapot? Oh, wait. That's not what you said.


*grumbling as I leave the thread*

 

[silverwhisper]

while blood is certainly filled with metaphor and associations, i'd argue that at least on lit anyway, it's more or less unnecessary. anybody looking for a vampire story on this particular site will probably not have a serious problem w/ the absence of blood from the process, IMV.

WRT the transformation: technically, it should probably be a two-way process, so both need to feed on one another, as it were. :>

ed

 

[TheCaptain]

while blood is certainly filled with metaphor and associations, i'd argue that at least on lit anyway, it's more or less unnecessary. anybody looking for a vampire story on this particular site will probably not have a serious problem w/ the absence of blood from the process, IMV.

WRT the transformation: technically, it should probably be a two-way process, so both need to feed on one another, as it were. :>

ed

True, I was thinking along those lines since I posted seriously above

This isnt REALLY a slasher/gore site, more erotica/hardcore orientated stories... just as long as the story is semi-convincing, and the sex hot, steamy and constant, I see no probs either with no blood, just as long as, as silverwhisper says, its a 2way event

Capt

 

[BedtimeStories]

Thank you, boys, for your help.

But, alas, there's no vamps in Sirhug's "pregnant neighbor" story I've been working on! The vamps are for another day. (And I may keep 'em lezbos! lol)

 

[silverwhisper]

as a straight man, i'm right there with you.

ed

 

[TheCaptain]

as a straight man, i'm right there with you.

ed

Of course... I'm straight too, thou some SOBs who will remain nameless on the GB dispute this fact

Burn in hell, fools!!! *refers to GB foes

Capt

 

[TheCaptain]

Thank you, boys, for your help.

But, alas, there's no vamps in Sirhug's "pregnant neighbor" story I've been working on! The vamps are for another day. (And I may keep 'em lezbos! lol)

Lezbo is better for vamps... ah the fantasies. Fun

Good luck, look forward to reading!

Capt