Does anyone here actually read the stories?

[Young Knave]

I do, once in while. I tend to gravitate to the stories that are a little on the stranger/more bizarre side. Incest and orgies. Not because I do any of them, but because I never have done any of them. Reading about ordinary, wholesome sex just doesn't interest me, I guess because I know those sorts of relationships well. And I do get a bit of a thrill from reading about other peoples experiences with these taboo activities.

I really am a decent, wholesome person though. Really. Anyone else here like the stories, or am I just a bit strange? What stories do you read?

 

[KillerMuffin]

Love them. Though I tend to write them more than read them.

 

[Willing and Unsure]

i read them on occasion... i've been thinking about submitting a couple.. but they're kinda short and dont know if i should still or not

 

[cymbidia]

Love them

I read a lot.
I write a lot.
I go for reading and writing the really wildly kinky stuff. Big bad BDSM - and i do that kinda stuff, too.

Oh yeh - and i'm a decent wholesome person, too. I'm just way kinked.

 

[Young Knave]

Post them.

If there short, why don't you post them here. You could put them here in this thread if you like, just to see what people think. It's my thread, and I say you can, so no one can criticize you for putting up stories here on the general board.

 

[Renegade]

In all the time I've been here, I think that there are only a very small handful of stories I've read from here. But most of them were either by BB members who wanted my opinion on their story. That, or I was just interested in seeing how certain BBers were as writers.

 

[Scruffy]

No

I simply come to Lit for the Delightful Martini Mixers.

 

[cymbidia]

But most of them were either by BB members who wanted my opinion on their story. That, or I was just interested in seeing how certain BBers were as writers.

Ever read any of mine? Just curious...

Probably not.

 

[Willing and Unsure]

deleted for personal reasons

 

[Willing and Unsure]

and the other....

deleted for personal reasons

 

[Scruffy]

well... since you said i can... here's one of them

All By Myself
For some reason, I have been exceptionally horny today. I can’t seem to get enough of myself. I couldn’t sleep last night and that’s when it started. About four this morning. I was lying here in bed and realized I was missing something, but what I wasn’t sure what it was, was self-pleasure. And after the dream I had the other night sure didn’t help me resist the urge. But I couldn’t resist myself any longer. I had to let myself go. The next thing I know, I’m lying on my bed, without my pants or underwear on. I’m rubbing my clit, hitting just the right spot so many times. I felt the desire for myself grow and I realized that just rubbing my clit wasn’t going to be enough. I started running my fingers over my breasts, and my nipples, felling them getting hard. I’m starting to drive myself up the wall here. But it’s still not enough. So I take off my shirt so I can feel my breasts better, wishing the whole time that I could suck on them. My nipples are so hard now. I let my right hand run its way down to my clit again. I can feel myself getting wet right now. I reach a little past there and tease myself, running my fingers over my wet hole. Ever so gently to make me want it more. I gently slide in two fingers first, feeling myself from the inside, wanting to scream in ecstasy. Slowly pulling them out and pushing them back in again for the excellent sensations I wanted to feel. I pulled out the two fingers just before orgasm and began to rub my clit again and tasting my juices. I love the way I taste. I leave my clit alone and begin playing with my nipples, wishing I could suck on them, but imagining that someone was. I’m getting closer and closer to orgasm. I rub my breasts some more, caressing them as if they were all I had to excite myself. OH MY GOSH!!! I’m cumming now. I want to scream from pleasure, but I don’t let myself knowing I will cum again very soon. My nipples are so hard right now. They almost hurt. I move my hands downward, placing one on my clit and rubbing it again, and the other over my hoe again to tease myself. I’m approaching that point again. I place three fingers in me now. I’m trying not to be loud. I want to moan and scream so loud at how well I’m getting myself off. I keep myself quiet and move my fingers in and out of my hot, wet pussy trying not to cum yet. I cant decide if I should keep rubbing my clit or if I should play with my breasts more. My nipples are so hard, the almost look fake. I keep rubbing my clit and driving myself closer and closer. I begin to pump my fingers faster and harder until I cant take it anymore. I thrust my hips into my hand and cum again.

Allright, I come here for 2 reasons.

 

[Renegade]

Ever read any of mine? Just curious...

Probably not.

Not yet, although you're one of the members I've been interested in lately.

 

[nasty]

I like to read/write

Along the lines of celebrity. Since I have a mental image of the celebrity already, it makes it easier for me to associate with it. I also like reading about incest, lesbians, AND, I like the new section on anal. Havn't read much of the last 3 categories, though. Mostly because I go for the better graded ones,4 or over, and ALOT of them are TOO DAMN LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't really like reading, or writing, stories that are over 2 pages long. Give me a story that has some backstory, then gets right to the point. If I wanna read a book, I'll read a Stephen King or something. Although it seems that the stories that have a novel-like feeling to em do better

 

[cymbidia]

Well, just hit the little blue www when you're ready. ~g~ Better have your kink shoes on, though; my stuff is raw and wild and definitely not for those who like it soft and easy.

My advice:
Ignore "First Meeting"; it's the dog story of the bunch.
"Just Desserts" is far too harsh for non-lifestylers.
I get the most positive responses from "Struggle" and "Hooded", with "Pierced" running a close third.
All my stories are experientially-based.

And all the poetry is angst-driven; maybe you don't even want to go there. ~laughing~ Besides, it's not really erotic at all, anyway.

 

[Willing and Unsure]

Allright, I come here for 2 reasons.

thanx Scruffy... and by the way, both of those stories are not fiction

 

[Young Knave]

Willing

It is nice to read such a raw, vivid story from a female point of view. You might want to try breaking your stories down into paragraphs though. It makes for easier reading.

 

[Willing and Unsure]

yeah yeah yeah... i know about the whole paragraph thing... i'm just not much of a writer and dont really know where to break it up for paragraphs... so i leave it as a full length...


guess that's what i get for being an engineering major in college

 

[nasty]

Well...

...you DO know about when a new person speaks, or it's another character's POV, you gotta change it. Do we need to go back to Elementary School?lol

 

[Willing and Unsure]

Re: Well...

...you DO know about when a new person speaks, or it's another character's POV, you gotta change it. Do we need to go back to Elementary School?lol

take a look now... is it any better?

 

[nasty]

It's better

But, I think it needs some more work. REALLY, THOUGH! Don't come to me for great advice. I'm no English Major.

 

[Weird Harold]

Re: Re: Well...

take a look now... is it any better?

Much better. I could quibble about where some of the paragraph breaks are, but...

It's a matter of where you, the author want the emphasis to fall, so it would only be a difference in opinion, and not a real problem with paragraph breaks.

Just for futere reference, the definition of a paragraph:


Paragraph, ..., ..., n. [O.Fr. Fr. paragraphs, < M.L. para-graphus, < Gr.paragraphos,a line or mark in the margin.] A distinct portion of written or printed matter dealing with a particular point or quoting the words of one speaker and usually beginning with an indentation on a new line; a note, item, or brief article, as in a newspaper, usually forming a distinct, undivided whole. -v.r. To divide into paragraphs; to express in a paragraph; to mention in a paragraph; write or publish paragraphs about. -par-a-graph-ic, ..., a.-par-a-graph-er, ..., n. One who writes paragraphs or short pieces as for a newspaper; also esp. Brit. par-a-graph-ist.

 

[Willing and Unsure]

Weird Harold...
i'm open to any suggestions when it comes to paragraphs... i'm terrible with english and all that stuff... now if you give me a math or physics problem, that's a different story

 

[Scruffy]

Weird Harold...
i'm open to any suggestions when it comes to paragraphs... i'm terrible with english and all that stuff... now if you give me a math or physics problem, that's a different story

Oh yeah???????

What's 6 times 7?

 

[Willing and Unsure]

originally posted by Scruffy
What's 6 times 7?

42


now cum on... challenge my brain at least

 

[Young Knave]

Don't worry.

Don't let the criticism bother you too much. I enjoyed your little stories. Having a female point of view about what gets her hot was nice.