Do you want a chapter 2?

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I left my second story: Finally his... Finally hers...; hanging. When the girl leaves the room, it implies that she got pregnant or that she nabs the guy in the end. A reader asks about the ending so I'm curious as to if I should start a new chapter and explore this relationship further. I didn't end the story with that in mind but, I could easily introduce the characters again, what do you think? Look for: Met on the Net.. I'm hoping it comes out soon. In the Novel/Novelette section.. this one will be a continuing story!!! My first story is titled: Never Again... !!!!

 

[dis_pac]

I would be happy to help you

But I am a lazy SOB and would like a link to it. I think that would help others find it too.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

here's a link

And well, at one time or another.. I've been a lazy SOB too!


http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=197959

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

here click it again for kicks

But I am a lazy SOB and would like a link to it. I think that would help others find it too.

here in case you too lazy to click the first one......<ha ha>


http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=197959

 

[dis_pac]

I've Read Your Story and...

I'm making notes as I go along,

was hoping you could give me some advice." I lean closer to his desk and place my hand on his. I can feel my heart racing and I take a deep breath before I start drawing tiny circles on his hand. I think to myself, god, I can't believe I'm doing this. Looking up at him I see he's staring at my hand.

I can actually feel her nervousness as she is about to pour her feelings on him, this is good!

"You taste so good. I knew you would." he tells me as his kisses travel to my eyes and across my nose.

Makes me want to say "you're a poet and didn't know it." Just sounds a little cheesy, if I was her it would make me giggle a little.

"A battle wound?" I ask as I bend to kiss a small scar on his chest just above his heart.

"Yes, a long time ago." We finish the buttons on each others clothes and I run my hands along his chest, letting my fingers feel the texture of his skin and the coarseness of his hair.

Sorry I'm curious, I'm sure he would say something quick about this. Bullet, knife, etc.

I feel his hands on my hips as he brings my bottom to the edge of the chair. My skirt snakes up my thighs and I grasp its hem and raise it to my hips. I hear his groan of pleasure as he sees my white panties. He reaches up my thigh and rolls down first one stocking and kisses the inside of my ankle and then does the same to my other leg.

Great visual, very stimulating.

I feel like my body is on display for him, like I'm a piece of art and he is worshiping me.

Great Line!

I loved the referance to the birds on the window ledge, gave it a real sense of reality.

The only thing a little lacking was that the actual sex seemed to be so short, I would have liked a little more detail there. (Cause I'm a horndog ) Other than that it was a great story, bravo, and yes I like the characters enough to find out what happens next. (I could see this one leading to a little bondage action along the way )

 

[Guest]

I left my second story: Finally his... Finally hers...; hanging. When the girl leaves the room, it implies that she got pregnant or that she nabs the guy in the end. A reader asks about the ending so I'm curious as to if I should start a new chapter and explore this relationship further. I didn't end the story with that in mind but, I could easily introduce the characters again, what do you think? Look for: Met on the Net.. I'm hoping it comes out soon. In the Novel/Novelette section.. this one will be a continuing story!!! My first story is titled: Never Again... !!!!

Do you want a Chapter Two? (Never Again, Chapter Two?)

That should be your decision. Do you feel there is enough story to take your characters further? Do you have the time and motivation to continue this series? Do you feel there was a solid ending and want to leave things at that?

If you wish it, then write it. But don't let the readers dictate which stories you write.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Do you want a Chapter Two? (Never Again, Chapter Two?)

That should be your decision. Do you feel there is enough story to take your characters further? Do you have the time and motivation to continue this series? Do you feel there was a solid ending and want to leave things at that?

If you wish it, then write it. But don't let the readers dictate which stories you write.

Thanks for your comments... I think I will leave it at that.. I have 2 stories right now that it will be a continuing series so I don't think I could handle 3.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

dis_pac

I never even so the poem!!!!! Ha Ha Ha

Thanks for your comments.. 2 more stories in the works, waiting for approval and the sex scenes have increased ALOT!!!!

This was my 2nd story!!