Do I really need a creative title?

[intriguess]

Okay this is not a poll, I just usually try to start with a title that will set the tone, sort of like a book title. Of course sometimes you write the story and the title comes later and seeing that I didn't feel like using "Not another intriguess thread" again I figured my flippant title would draw those who already read my stuff.

Okay now that I've blathered on here's the opening.




IC


Mackenzie was tired and horny, which wasn't all that unusual for her especially now. She slipped out of bed, it was hard to believe that four months ago they'd been saying good bye. Of course he hadn't known that until the next day when she'd left and divorce papers had been served. Their lives had been going different directions for a while and when her latest temp job offered her a full time position she accepted. Today was the day that they were signing the final papers and it would be all neat and legal. Today she would have to face him one last time. Today she had to hold it together.

She had flown in late last night and even know she wondered how things would go. Mackenzie showered, trying to rinse off the tiredness, even as the warm water only made her more horny. She sighed as her nipples tightened and groaned as her fingers slipped downward as if they had a mind of their own. She still fantasized about him and a few minutes later she was gasping for breath.

Mackenzie relunctantly left the shower and was glad the mirrors had fogged up, she'd never been skinny. She shook her head, her soon to be ex had always made her feel like the only woman in the room. She bit her lip, it was a necessary evil the divorce, sure the sex was good, but being intimate was never the problem. Finding time to be together when their careers pulled them in opposite direction was, avoiding talking about things by fucking like bunnies was definetly a problem.

Mackenzie splayed her hands over her abdomen, it was the biggest lie in the world. She was pregnant and she was determined to keep it, and luckily the baby seemed content to hide so far. She could tell the difference, but once dressed she'd look just as fat as she'd always been.

Mackenzie had tried to call when she'd found out, but when a woman answered the phone she had freaked out. The child was one piece of him she would have forever. Her lawyer did not know, and she found herself facing the meeting with anticipation and dread.

She dressed slowly, taking her time with her appearance, wearing something nice, but proffessional. Mackenzie decided not to bother with make up, there was no reason to hide how tired she felt. She glanced at the clock and headed out, she flagged a taxi and the ride to the lawyers seemed to take forever and once over seemed to have gone past in blink of an eye.

She squared her shoulders and hoped for the best even as she prepared for the worst.

 

[cuteDanny21]

dan, her ex, was checking his watch. wondering why in the hell kenzie was late. this was just like her he thought. couldn't show up for something important on time. he was happy he was leaving here and about to start a fresh new life with his young asian gf. he wasn't too sure how he would react when he saw her, it had been months. i just have to ge through this he thought.

 

[intriguess]

Four months, it seemed like an eternity and she hesitated at the building door. She finally was ready to face whatever was inside, the simple lavender suit covering her curvy figure. Not that it would matter, Dan had always said he knew what she looked like naked and rarely saw what she was wearing.

She walked confidently through the building and was not surprised to find out Dan was already there. Mackenzie wondered how he managed to move on so quickly. Heck she hadn't been able to even think of being with someone else, she supposed it was one of those basic differences between men and women. That he could go off and screw the next best thing and she doubted she'd be happy with anything less than what they had had.

At least he was scowling when she entered, it made it easier to think of why she was doing this when he looked so mean. The lawyers greeted her and made chit chat, asked if she needed anything to drink as she sat down. She gave a tired smile.

"I'm fine, let's just get this over and done."

Both lawyers seemed relieved, "We're used to a lot more bickering and pettyness." One of them said, she wasn't really paying attention to which, as she noticed how sexy Dan's mouth looked when he scowled.

 

[warmredglow]

It had been a hard soulless month and John was keen to hand over his last case to the senior partner of Hart and Hart. Stepping quickly into the plush office of Harold S Hart, the most infamous and least liked litigator of the firm, John overheard two names that would changes his life forever, Mackenzie Alfonso and Dan Hest.

John had been secretly in love with Mackenzie Alfonso since his 3rd year of school and he knew this was the same person. He thought he had purged any feelings he had for her when she first became involved with that gutter rat Dan Hest. Now visions of her invaded every part of his senses, feelings rushed over his body and into the very depth of his being. Her smell drove into him and filled him with hunger, he could taste her in every part of his mouth and he was helpless to her.

John, clearing his vision, shaking the fog out of his mind, took presence of the room and was hit in the chest with a blow that almost toppled him. There she was in all her Italian beauty, her blue black hair falling over her full breasts, her woman curves and the face of somebody that did not recognise him from any other man in the world. John decided in that instance that this factor would change, never again would he be a stranger to this woman.

“John, I would like you to meet Mr Dan Hest, he is a client of the Firms” boomed the deep rich voice of Harold S Hart “and this is Ms Mackenzie Alfonso and her lawyer Mr Smithfield. Sit in as second chare will you my boy” he said without a second thought.

 

[cuteDanny21]

i greated the lawyers coldly, some high priced scam artists. i start to eye kenzie up and down, damn, she looks pretty good lately, i think to myself. i think back to the last time we had sex. one of those marathon sessions that lasted all night. kenzie was never the prettiest girl but boy was she giving in sex. you could tell she really appreciated it when i fucked her hard. Kenzie was easily better than KIm, my current skinny asian gf. i wonder who is fucking her now? i thought as my mind drew back to being tough for this case
"it is about time you go here Kenzie, i have places to go and people to do, i mean meet."

 

[intriguess]

Mackenzie was relieved he was in asshole mode, but wondered what was up his ass. Usually he only got grumpy when he wasn't getting any, but the way he spoke let her know he was definetly with someone else. It made it that much easier, she hoped he was happy as she glanced at the other guy in room. Her friends had warned her that his lawyers were sharkish, but her lawyer had dealt with them in past and had a good track record.

Danny had changed a lot since four months ago, he looked harsher somehow. It was tough to not think about their last meeting, a sweaty dozen or so hours. Mackenzie pulled her mind back to the present, such thoughts would only make things more difficult than they had to be.

 

[cuteDanny21]

dan could help but notice that kenzie looked good, he was liking her natural look now. no make up. made her look distinguished. still fuckable. kenzie always gave him great sex. dan's erection started to grow, Dan coughed and pushed his hand over his crotch to hide his growing erection. thank god they were already seated he thought. no one would notice.
Dan gavea forced smile as he looked over at kenzie. he didn't want her to have any idea what was going on with him. he didn't want her to know that kim had started to become frigid and he was seeking other women to satisfy his great sexual hunger. but none could fill it like kenzie could. Dan was sure some other lucky guy was fucking her. just look at her, she looked desperate for sex. she was always desperate for men's attention.
Dan stroked his cock twice, ever so discreet during the meeting. he knew he would have to deal with it afterward.

 

[warmredglow]

John needed the meeting to stop right now as this was not the time to be representing Hest against anybody, certainly not one of the voluptuous Alfonso twins. John noticed a large jug of iced water on the oak sideboard and instantly knew what he would do to stall this meeting.

John sat down and quickly wrote a note on a slip of paper, pretending it had something to do with the case. He surreptitiously folded it into a palm sized square and proceeded to ask “would any body like a glass of water as I’m parched?”

John stood up and moved around the table and dropped the note unnoticed into the open bag of Kenzie. After retrieving the jug of iced water he moved next to Hest tilted the jug awkwardly, which slipped from his hand and banged down loudly on the desk with iced water bucketing over the desk and onto the stomach and lap of Hest.

 

[intriguess]

Just when she thought things were going smoothly and that they would be able to sign everything and have this done before lunch, the other guy offered a glass of water and somehow ended up with the whole thing landing in Dan's lap. She couldn't help but laugh, and didn't care what anyone thought. She was instantly reminded the last time the two of them had played with ice cubes. Mackenzie finally quieted down as he had stood up and muttering something.

 

[cuteDanny21]

"You stupid son of a bitch, how could you spill this on me? god damn, you are just a clumsy oaf. What the fuck!", I yelled loadly. "You got it all over my favorite suit, I can't deal with all you jackass lawyers. Finish this up and just send the papers over to my office, I will sign them from there.", I barked as I stormed out of the room. My crotch soaked, which highlighted my massive erection to the room.

 

[warmredglow]

After John had words with Harold Hart he languidly made his way to the men’s bathroom – thinking all the time of Mackenzie. Miles away in thought, John entered the spacious bathroom only to be confronted by an angry Hest, gun in hand.

“Ok boy, you’re coming with me. No noise or distractions and all will go well, if not, then you’ll be singing to a different tune.” He said. John froze; never had he thought that the current day’s events would end up like this.

Hest moved in close and gave John a quick jab in the ribs with the Glock 20 and said, “lets move, my boys are rounding up Mackenzie, it will be a nice little party”. Hest moved in real close and whispered into John’s ear, “Mackenzie and I go way back, I been fucking her ever since I can remember and expect to be fucking her again real soon. Don’t think I don’t know what you are up to – I saw you drop that note into her bag. Lets see what she makes of all this.”

They moved out of the bathroom and directly into the lift without incident. Hest pushed the lift button to the penthouse level on the 78th floor. John’s mind raced, that’s old man Hart’s place – what the hell does Hest and Hart have going on?

 

[cuteDanny21]

After John had words with Harold Hart he languidly made his way to the men’s bathroom – thinking all the time of Mackenzie. Miles away in thought, John entered the spacious bathroom only to be confronted by an angry Hest, gun in hand.

“Ok boy, you’re coming with me. No noise or distractions and all will go well, if not, then you’ll be singing to a different tune.” He said. John froze; never had he thought that the current day’s events would end up like this.

Hest moved in close and gave John a quick jab in the ribs with the Glock 20 and said, “lets move, my boys are rounding up Mackenzie, it will be a nice little party”. Hest moved in real close and whispered into John’s ear, “Mackenzie and I go way back, I been fucking her ever since I can remember and expect to be fucking her again real soon. Don’t think I don’t know what you are up to – I saw you drop that note into her bag. Lets see what she makes of all this.”

They moved out of the bathroom and directly into the lift without incident. Hest pushed the lift button to the penthouse level on the 78th floor. John’s mind raced, that’s old man Hart’s place – what the hell does Hest and Hart have going on?

I don't like that at all. Using a gun? NO, never. Lets not move the story in that direction. what do you think intriguess?

 

[intriguess]

OOC It is really rude to write for another character especially something as off kilter as guns. This thread was never intended to go that way and I'm going to ignore that post and continue.




Men were so stupid she thought, and incredibly easy as she noticed her exes obvious bulge. She signed where they said to sign, assets had long ago been allocated and she was asking for nothing that hadn't been hers going into the marriage. Her lawyer insisted she get something from her contributions to the house payments and she had insisted that she wanted it over as soon as possible.

"I'll be in town for a couple of days, catching up with old friends. You can leave a message at my hotel when he's signed and just mail me a copy."

She had to go to the bathroom, and gathered up her purse and left the room. Mackenzie took a few deep breaths, the conference room had seemed so tiny. She headed for the women's restroom and was so wrapped up in the fact that it was almost over and she would be free to live her life that she didn't even notice Dan.

 

[cuteDanny21]

I had just stormed out of the bathroom. The hand dryer did little to help my soaked crotch.
"I will be glad when this is finally over," I said with a cold inflection in my voice. My eyes betrayed my interest in you as they wandered down to your ample breasts.
"This will be finanlized by the end of the day. I am only going to be in town a few days and I want to fly back to ASAP. I hope things are going well,"I said in my most civil tone. I had turned to walk away....

 

[intriguess]

The asshole act was getting old, "What the hell is up your butt? Did you not get a pick me up fuck this morning or something?" She was curious as to who he was fucking, as her lawyer had wanted to use the info against him. SHe had refused, she wanted the end to be quick and clean.

It took her a while to realize he was flying out of town and wondered where he had moved after the split. She hated that she still cared about what he was doing.

 

[warmredglow]

John had decided that he was being a little too caught in the past and he needed to concentrate on taking that holiday. He thought to himself that he must have just relapsed for a moment.

Julie, John's secret lover of 3 years had been waiting in his office for the last 15 minutes with her deep plunging neckline and short mini skirt - which she never wore pants under and was usually wet with excitement. The thought of her sent John to immediately leave the office, find Julie, give her a nibble behind the ear and say "lets hit the road".

Throwing the keys on the reception desk along with his letter of resignation, John was off for a long, long time.

 

[cuteDanny21]

The asshole act was getting old, "What the hell is up your butt? Did you not get a pick me up fuck this morning or something?" She was curious as to who he was fucking, as her lawyer had wanted to use the info against him. SHe had refused, she wanted the end to be quick and clean.

It took her a while to realize he was flying out of town and wondered where he had moved after the split. She hated that she still cared about what he was doing.

"Nothing is up my butt Kenzie!" I said coldly. "No I didn't get a pick me up fuck this morning," I added sarcastically. Dan had started to grow tired of sex with his young asian girlfriend Kim. she didn't satsify him like Kenzie did. He hadn't had sex in about 2 months now, Dan instead took to masterbating everday. He did think of Kenzie from time to time when he masterbated, but most times he just jerked off to his mounting porn collection featuring curvy busty women.

 

[intriguess]

"I'd forgotten how snappy you get when you are frustrated," she said trying to hide a smile, heck it had only been in the early days of dating that he'd been so curt. It had only been after she'd caught him jerking off that she'd gotten him to confess to how long he'd been without. It had been shortly after that, that they had first fucked. It was a raw I need it NOW, sort of thing. It was only after a much needed rest that he'd gotten her off. The memory brought an entirely different kind of smile to her face.

"Bored with your latest bitch already?" she asked slightly cattily.

 

[cuteDanny21]

"I'd forgotten how snappy you get when you are frustrated," she said trying to hide a smile, heck it had only been in the early days of dating that he'd been so curt. It had only been after she'd caught him jerking off that she'd gotten him to confess to how long he'd been without. It had been shortly after that, that they had first fucked. It was a raw I need it NOW, sort of thing. It was only after a much needed rest that he'd gotten her off. The memory brought an entirely different kind of smile to her face.

"Bored with your latest bitch already?" she asked slightly cattily.

With a disguisted sigh, I blurted out, "it is that obvious isn't it? She doesn't have that raw, powerful sexual energy that we share,...i mean, that we shared, past tense, past tense." My brow had perspired. It was very obvious that I was nervous and didn't want to divulge too much information to you.

I momentarily forgot about my crotch being soaked and sporting a full erection. I actually enjoyed this little banter between the two of us. Some old relationships sure die hard, I thought, as I slowly started to make my way out of there.

 

[intriguess]

This was probably her last opportunity to fuck him ever and she was relunctant to let it go. "Don't suppose you'd be available for a good bye boink?" She'd never been one to mince words, but her language always got more sexually around him. Was undoubtedly a bad habit to be so comfortable with baiting him.

 

[cuteDanny21]

This was probably her last opportunity to fuck him ever and she was relunctant to let it go. "Don't suppose you'd be available for a good bye boink?" She'd never been one to mince words, but her language always got more sexually around him. Was undoubtedly a bad habit to be so comfortable with baiting him.

I stared at her, she knew I wanted her, I knew I wanted her. No, I was going to make her sweat a second, let her think that I was thinking about it. I nod and let her lead the way. I grabbed her plump ass and smiled.
"Lets see what you still got"

 

[intriguess]

He was being a twerp with the public grope, but right now she didn't really care. After all until he signed on the dotted line they were technically married and she almost pulled him into the nearest empty room but she wanted to see how long it could stand to not be touching. They made it out of the building and she finally asked, "Your hotel room or mine?"

 

[cuteDanny21]

He was being a twerp with the public grope, but right now she didn't really care. After all until he signed on the dotted line they were technically married and she almost pulled him into the nearest empty room but she wanted to see how long it could stand to not be touching. They made it out of the building and she finally asked, "Your hotel room or mine?"

"Yours," I said with a sly grin on my face. "I want you to take me...there....then take me...as you please." Eventhough Dan had a very dominating personality, he secretly desired a women who could take control. That was something he never had with Kenzie, nor did he have with his current asian girlfriend Kim. Asian girls don't seem to be able to be in control and that is what Dan need and craved.

 

[intriguess]

She was slightly surprised at his words. While they both had strong sexual appetites and she'd initiated probably just as much as he did, in the past he always took over. It was one of those, if it's good don't change it type things and so she'd never really gotten to manhandle him much. It seemed almost too good to be true and she smiled that little I know what you want and I'm going to enjoy giving it to you smiles. She tugged his tie playfully as she quickly hailed a taxi.

 

[cuteDanny21]

She was slightly surprised at his words. While they both had strong sexual appetites and she'd initiated probably just as much as he did, in the past he always took over. It was one of those, if it's good don't change it type things and so she'd never really gotten to manhandle him much. It seemed almost too good to be true and she smiled that little I know what you want and I'm going to enjoy giving it to you smiles. She tugged his tie playfully as she quickly hailed a taxi.

"Thats a naughty little girl. YOu lead me by my tie, I am your willing and obedient play toy. Use me, please use me!" Dan was really hard up, it was painfully obvious. Eventhough Dan had toned up from the last time he saw Kenzie and could easily over power her, he really wanted his soft, curvy woman take him as she saw fit. Dan knew he would enjoy this meeting. He couldn't wait to get to Kenzie's hotel.