Disect my story, please.

[msboy8]

hello,
Rumple Foreskin asked for stories to fillet, so I'm volunteering a story. My latest story is Her Time out of Time

Thanks, msboy8

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

hello,
Rumple Foreskin asked for stories to fillet, so I'm volunteering a story. My latest story is Her Time out of Time

Thanks, msboy8

msboy8,

My bad.

I should have made it clearer how this deal works. The idea is to post a notice on the top sticky, the one with the ungainly title: Discussion: Feedback and review of stories; Story Disc Circle business and Queue Give the name of your story plus its URL and category if appropriate, and say you'd like to have it critiqued.

The SDC usually puts one new story up every week. While waiting, read and critique a few of the other stories. For your story to be eligible, you must crit at least two. Since the number of stories waiting for critique is small, yours should be up in a couple of weeks. If still confused, check out the second sticky, What's Going On Here? Information.

If still in doubt, feel free to PM me or even better, Pure, who's the new site moderator. Sorry about the confusion.

Rumple