M McFu Virgin Joined Apr 30, 2009 Posts 4 May 4, 2009 #1 Where can I put the beginings of story just so I can get a bit of crituque on my writing.
P Penelope Street Literotica Guru Joined May 28, 2004 Posts 1,471 May 4, 2009 #2 http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=643578
