KillerMuffin
Seraphically Disinclined
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Hey, it's my own personal Jiminy Cricket's turn!
TheEarl said:Hi all. Have decided to let you deride one of my stories again. The story is 'From a Boeing 747' http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=85100.
A few questions:
Did the blurb ("She started by reading over his shoulder") grab you?
Do you think this story should be in this category?
Is the sex hot enough? Was there enough of it?
Did the dirty talk work? Or did it sound stupid?
The Earl