Discussion on Get Me To The Church On Time (2nd/3rd person?)

[Zingiber]

Comments: Good story! I have one question though. The whole story is in 2nd person, why is this specific storyline in 3rd?

(unsigned comment on the thread No one? in the story Get Me To The Church On Time)

I had planned the three major female characters involved in the wedding as individual leads, with "second person immersive" storylines. In fact, I removed the FIRST_NAME/LAST_NAME binding, because it was confusing when the major characters' threads referred to each other's names.

The contributing author who started the "friend from college" story path used third person, which I continued rather than break the flow.

And if you have any ideas about what sorts of scenes or plot twists you'd like, give me suggestions, or contribute a page!


-Z.