Discusion: Heralds of the Dying Age

[Guest]

Hello, I'm a lit writer and I would like feedback on a series of stories I'm working on. This is a pretty large undertaking, writing a novel a chapter at a time and submiting it to lit. My story, "Heralds of The Dying Age" is my first attempt at an erotic novel and, as I'm bringing it forth a single chapter at a time, I thought it would be nice to have discussions about the story, the pacing, the setting, and anything else that sparked the interest or raised the ire of my fellow litizens and beloved readers.

Therefore, I submit "Heralds of the Dying Age" for review and consideration in the story discussion circle.

Thank you,

- Wyld -

 

[Pure]

Hi Wyld,

Welcome,
Post your name and identifying data for your intended story [NOT the story itself] or chapter in the first thread [Sticky: Discussion Feedback], which is a kind of queue. Yours would be 'up' soon, since things are very quiet.

Be aware that critiques are offered on a 'swap' basis; that you should have a look at and comment briefly on others' pieces from time to time -- see Karen and slick so far.

Best,
J.