Detective type erotic story

BlackSnake

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Mother comes home to find her son in bed with an escort. She do not join in on the party, but she doesn't interrupt either. She confront her son after the woman leave.

The mother makes no bones about telling her son what she think about men and how they are led by the head between their legs.

The mother talk to her friends who are also stay at home moms. They guest that their husbands may call escort services when they are business trips or when they say they
are working late.

The women start talking about their on fantasy, and decided to look into how to become an escort. They go to the woman's son and get the information from him. They make contact and a woman came out to talk with them about the business.

The women find it exciting and decide to give it a try.

<< action scenes >>

The women have a great time

<< one of the women get busted >>

The woman make a deal with a woman detective. The detective want to catch the ring leaders not the house wives.

The ring leaders are into dangerous things center around drugs.

The detective use the housewives to get enough to bust the ring leaders.

<< lots more action >>


The detective with help from the housewives bust the ring leader and the gang.
 
Interesting, though I think it would be more fun to do a woman detective story from the detectives view. That way can have some action, and sex and nobody will say jumped around to much. :catroar:
 
emap said:
Interesting, though I think it would be more fun to do a woman detective story from the detectives view. That way can have some action, and sex and nobody will say jumped around to much. :catroar:


Maybe, but I was thinking that the housewives would learn the price they'd have to pay for the fun they were having. Additionally, they help the cop get the bad guy.

Using the woman detective, she could be shown as a woman and not a guy with tits. She'd get fucked good fashion and enjoy it, but wouldn't forget her goal to get the bad guys. She learns the appeal of playing the naughty game of escort.

It's about the fantasy of being an escort and the thrill and excitement of trying to catch the bad guys.
 
It sounds like your thinking of doing it in that icky third person style. :devil:
 
emap said:
It sounds like your thinking of doing it in that icky third person style. :devil:
Oh, I do hope so. First person is so six-year-old's school news book.
 
The mother that catches her son with the escort to begin the story. I think the escort should be a woman about the same age as the mother, not cheaply dressed just looking like someone's mother when she leaves.

The son is really into the woman, getting his jollies, but bringing the woman great pleasure, causing the mother to envy the escort.

Seeing her son give the woman cash makes it even more appealing. Maybe her husband is giving her hints that she doesn't contribute to the household. And the mother feels that she needs to be compensated for the things she does around the house, including sleeping with her husband.

Things that make being an escort appealing.
 
Well being married to snooper would be a really good reason to make being an escort appealing. :p
 
emap said:
Well being married to snooper would be a really good reason to make being an escort appealing. :p

I'm starting this story today. I hope that y'all will at least read it. I'm hoping that I will be able to pull everything together very sexually and entertaining.

House wives become escorts to fulfill their fantasies and to make a little money on the side to get some of the things their husband's say they can't afford. The escort agency they get mixed up with is run by a crime lord. A female detective goes undercover to bust the crime lord. The house wives soon realize that they are in way over their heads and are threatened when they try to leave the escort service. The wives discover that one of them is a cop. The house wives and cop team up to bust the crime lord.
 
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