Desperately searching for..

[FallingToFly]

Someone who is good at reading and offering thoughts and opinions. Not editing per se, just suggesting ways the story could change and/or grow.

I am stuck on like... seven, I think stories... all short, all quick reads. I just need a pair of fresh eyes and a fresh mind to rehash what I'm completely missing. If it would be easier, I can post them in a thread, and anyone who likes can leave their thoughts.

I'm getting down to the crunch time and beginning to fray at the seams.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I bill mysefl as a decent editor but more of a mentor. Sounds like we're a match. PM if you're interested. If uncertain, check out a few of my posts. I like detail and good dialogue to build characters. Stories with sex, not sex stories.