I need help with this scene it is a ballroom and kind of stuck. Seamus is a leprechaun and Aven is a fairy. Seamus is hiding from the Magical Protection Force and has escaped so far from them without being seen. His evil twin brother Patrick is at the ball Seamus notice him and wants to thump him. Anyway here is the begining of the chapter. It is a childrens story mainly but I would like your view on it How would it be to you if it where an adult story? Also Aven and Seamus spent the night together before the ball. Aven tells him to meet in the summer house where they overhear a goblin like creature crying and talking. As they listen Seamus heard of what his brother Patrick had done. He had been framed. He had made the goblin steal an opal called Luck Less and planted it on him. Anyway here is the begining of the chapter. Oh and by the way when Seamus went back to Aven`s bedroom to get the Opal from the his jacket pocket he got caught red handed. Thanks for reading.
The Midsummer Ball was in full swing. Every leprechaun and every fairy across the kingdom was there. Midsummer Eve was a magical event and it only happens on July 24th every year. Their powers are regenerated by the sun rays at sunset. A huge banquet is held and afterwards they dance the night away until the early hours of the morn.
Seamus stepped into the crowd wearing the disguise that Aven had given him. The outfit was too tight and it started to make him itch.
Huge crystal chandeliers hung from the white pattern plastered ceiling with gold leafing. Everyone was dressed in Victorian outfits as it was this year themes. He recognized some people his parents who were chatting away to their neighbours the O` Ryan `s. Mr O` Ryan was a plump sort of a leprechaun while his wife who looked elegant and slim. Seamus wished he could be near them. Then he saw his brother looking smug Seamus clinched his fists. He was just about to go forward when a bugle was sounded.
“Will you all please make your way for the king and his daughter. Princess Aven.” the doorman shouted.
Everybody lined up on either side of the entrance. The doorman opened the door and in walked the king behind Aven. Everybody commented on how beautiful Aven looked. She smiled as she walked along behind her father. Seamus pushed his way through to the front to try and catch a glimpse of her. She was more stunning than ever. Her
The Midsummer Ball was in full swing. Every leprechaun and every fairy across the kingdom was there. Midsummer Eve was a magical event and it only happens on July 24th every year. Their powers are regenerated by the sun rays at sunset. A huge banquet is held and afterwards they dance the night away until the early hours of the morn.
Seamus stepped into the crowd wearing the disguise that Aven had given him. The outfit was too tight and it started to make him itch.
Huge crystal chandeliers hung from the white pattern plastered ceiling with gold leafing. Everyone was dressed in Victorian outfits as it was this year themes. He recognized some people his parents who were chatting away to their neighbours the O` Ryan `s. Mr O` Ryan was a plump sort of a leprechaun while his wife who looked elegant and slim. Seamus wished he could be near them. Then he saw his brother looking smug Seamus clinched his fists. He was just about to go forward when a bugle was sounded.
“Will you all please make your way for the king and his daughter. Princess Aven.” the doorman shouted.
Everybody lined up on either side of the entrance. The doorman opened the door and in walked the king behind Aven. Everybody commented on how beautiful Aven looked. She smiled as she walked along behind her father. Seamus pushed his way through to the front to try and catch a glimpse of her. She was more stunning than ever. Her
