Denied Story: No explanation

[CarterRyan]

Can anyone explain(or offer a possible reason) why the following story was denied?

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/5198

The person who denied it didn't give a reason.

 

[thesorrow07]

That's weird, because the first story I submitted was denied, but with great advice on how to improve it.
I rewrote part of it, and presented it better, and Darkness returns to Middle-Earth was born.

 

[thesorrow07]

And also, I read your story, and it is good.
I would have gladly added to it. I've been waiting for an "I dream of Jeannie" story.

 

[RicoLouis]

I am thinking it might be the first thread is to short. I got rejected once for having an openning like that.

 

[CarterRyan]

The first thread is short, but it isn't the real intro thread. It just asks which point of view the reader wants to choose.

 

[Torg]

Can anyone explain(or offer a possible reason) why the following story was denied?

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/5198

The person who denied it didn't give a reason.

Okay, let's say you resubmit your story, I look at it, and I approve it.

Now let's just remove that step about resubmitting your story.

Have at it.

Enjoy.

 

[thesorrow07]

Okay, let's say you resubmit your story, I look at it, and I approve it.

Now let's just remove that step about resubmitting your story.

Have at it.

Enjoy.

Good on ya, mate!