delicate poets?

[WickedEve]

I'm not very observant (bad thing for a poet) but I just noticed that the Story Feedback forum says "Post your feedback about Literotica stories you love or hate!" And for Poetry Feedback & Discussion we have: "Post your praise and comments about Lit poetry and poets." There is no mention of loving or hating a poem. lol



Sigh... well, I'm amused by the whole thing--for the next 9 1/2 to 13 seconds.

 

[robynwildchild]

OK

time up be gone with yourself!

lol
nine and half seconds...
who do you love or hate.. eh?

for the next 9 1/2 to 13 seconds. [/B][/QUOTE]

 

[WickedEve]

Re: OK

time up be gone with yourself!

lol
nine and half seconds...
who do you love or hate.. eh?

for the next 9 1/2 to 13 seconds.

My 13 seconds of interest are gone.

But it is odd to have praise for poetry, and love and hate for stories. I just don't think it's fair. I want some poetry hating. I hate some of my poems, and I think I have a right to hate them!

This me hating: Can't you feel my poetry-hate?

 

[The_Fool]

Re: Re: OK

My 13 seconds of interest are gone.

But it is odd to have praise for poetry, and love and hate for stories. I just don't think it's fair. I want some poetry hating. I hate some of my poems, and I think I have a right to hate them!

This me hating: Can't you feel my poetry-hate?

There are much more interesting attributes that you have that I would rather feel then your poety-hate.....

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: OK

There are much more interesting attributes that you have that I would rather feel then your poety-hate.....

But my poetry-hate is ripe and bouncy. Squeeze it.

 

[flyguy69]

Re: Re: Re: Re: OK

But my poetry-hate is ripe and bouncy. Squeeze it.

Put a pink thong on it and strut it past the docks.

 

[The_Fool]

Re: Re: Re: Re: OK

But my poetry-hate is ripe and bouncy. Squeeze it.

True, but it's just a tad contrived. I prefer to squeeze your more natural parts...

 

[WickedEve]

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Put a pink thong on it and strut it past the docks.

Too much competition for the ex. Those sailors would trade him in for poetry-hate in a second.





Gosh, this is a really lame thread. But it was either this or buff my dildo. I do mean cleaning and not... well... Though, I am considering getting rid of those toys now that I am entering 39 the sequel. I figure that I'll be 39 for at least 2 more years. You know, trilogy. Though, I should go with 39 the sitcom. I could be 39 in syndication for about a decade.

 

[DeepAsleep]

"Because, Fuck poets. What a miserable fuckin' bunch, for the most part... Don't get me wrong, there are some shining stars, but there's a LOT of substitute teachers in tweed jackets that all drive fucked up Toyota Corrollas and only write poetry for other asshole poets. 'Alright, this is for you, Stewart, ok, it's a retaliatory poem to your revenge poem at the long beach poetry slam night, last week.' "
-Henry Rollins, excerpt from the album, "A Rollins in the Wry"

If you're gonna hate something, hate it like Rollins, I say. He's better at it.

>=]

 

[WickedEve]

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True, but it's just a tad contrived. I prefer to squeeze your more natural parts...

My goal is to have no natural parts. I want to enhance myself with plastic, latex, and helium, eventually replacing everything with parts I can buy at the local WalMart.

 

[WickedEve]

"Because, Fuck poets. What a miserable fuckin' bunch, for the most part... Don't get me wrong, there are some shining stars, but there's a LOT of substitute teachers in tweed jackets that all drive fucked up Toyota Corrollas and only write poetry for other asshole poets. 'Alright, this is for you, Stewart, ok, it's a retaliatory poem to your revenge poem at the long beach poetry slam night, last week.' "
-Henry Rollins, excerpt from the album, "A Rollins in the Wry"

If you're gonna hate something, hate it like Rollins, I say. He's better at it.

>=]

That's some good hating.

 

[sandspike]

stories vs poems

Who in the hell hates a porn story? There are no bad porn
stories, they are like beer, some are just better than others.
As far as poems, I hate the 99 % I don't understand. Unless
one of the lovely female poets wrote it.

 

[DeepAsleep]

That's some good hating.

Rollins is good at hating and still managing to come off as compassionate. I enjoy that about him.

By the way, have I mentioned that you have the coolest hair I've seen in weeks?

 

[Reltne]

I'm not very observant (bad thing for a poet) but I just noticed that the Story Feedback forum says "Post your feedback about Literotica stories you love or hate!" And for Poetry Feedback & Discussion we have: "Post your praise and comments about Lit poetry and poets." There is no mention of loving or hating a poem. lol
. . .

But note that on the main index page that lists all of the story and poem types with clickable links, every story type name has a number after it. Except for the "New Poems" board which is followed by "(object)".

So, if it doesn't say "hate", at least it encourages you to take exception to and protest the new poems.

No?

 

[WickedEve]

Rollins is good at hating and still managing to come off as compassionate. I enjoy that about him.

By the way, have I mentioned that you have the coolest hair I've seen in weeks?

but it has that choppy piece that coming across my cheek. doesn't that bug you? it bugs me. I hate it more than poetry.

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: delicate poets?

But note that on the main index page that lists all of the story and poem types with clickable links, every story type name has a number after it. Except for the "New Poems" board which is followed by "(object)".

So, if it doesn't say "hate", at least it encourages you to take exception to and protest the new poems.

No?

I object to that.

 

[Angeline]

I hate this poem.

Home
Edgar Guest

IT takes a heap o' livin' in a house t' make it home,
A heap o' sun an' shadder, an' ye sometimes have t' roam
Afore ye really 'preciate the things ye lef' behind,
An' hunger fer 'em somehow, with 'em allus on yer mind.
It don't make any differunce how rich ye get t' be,
How much yer chairs an' tables cost, how great yer luxury;
It ain't home t' ye, though it be the palace of a king,
Until somehow yer soul is sort o' wrapped round everything.

Home ain't a place that gold can buy or get up in a minute;
Afore it's home there's got t' be a heap o' livin' in it;
Within the walls there's got t' be some babies born, and then
Right there ye've got t' bring 'em up t' women good, an' men;
And gradjerly as time goes on, ye find ye wouldn't part
With anything they ever used -- they've grown into yer heart:
The old high chairs, the playthings, too, the little shoes they wore
Ye hoard; an' if ye could ye'd keep the thumb-marks on the door.

Ye've got t' weep t' make it home, ye've got t' sit an' sigh
An' watch beside a loved one's bed, an' know that Death is nigh;
An' in the stillness o' the night t' see Death's angel come,
An' close the eyes o' her that smiled, an' leave her sweet voice dumb.
Fer these are scenes that grip the heart, an'when yer tears are dried,
Ye find the home is dearer than it was, an' sanctified;
An' tuggin' at ye always are the pleasant memories
O' her that was an' is no more -- ye can't escape from these.

Ye've got t' sing an' dance fer years, ye've got t' romp an' play,
An' learn t' love the things ye have by usin' 'em each day;
Even the roses 'round the porch must blossom year by year
Afore they 'come a part o' ye, suggestin' someone dear
Who used t' love 'em long ago, an' trained 'em jes t' run
The way they do, so's they would get the early mornin' sun;
Ye've got t' love each brick an' stone from cellar up t' dome:
It takes a heap o' livin' in a house t' make it home.

 

[WickedEve]

Re: I hate this poem.

I hated it, truly hated it, by the 3rd line. And this may not be fair, but I stopped there, because of all the (').

 

[Angeline]

Re: Re: I hate this poem.

I hated it, truly hated it, by the 3rd line. And this may not be fair, but I stopped there, because of all the (').

Lol. It really sucks, doesn't it? On top of being dopey and trite, it has all those weird "common man" dialogue thingies in it. It's a pain in the ass to read.

See? I really do hate it.

 

[twelveoone]

ma ident'y ha' be'en di'cove'd
jes call me ed

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: I hate this poem.

Lol. It really sucks, doesn't it? On top of being dopey and trite, it has all those weird "common man" dialogue thingies in it. It's a pain in the ass to read.

See? I really do hate it.

I want to share your hatred of this poem. lol
It really is difficult to read. I was trying so hard to read the yer and ye and t' that I had no idea what he was talking about. Now, I know how some readers feel about my confusing and weird poetry.

 

[Liar]

Re: I hate this poem.

Home
Edgar Guest

IT takes a heap o' livin' in a house t' make it home,
A heap o' sun an' shadder, an' ye sometimes have t' roam
Afore ye really 'preciate the things ye lef' behind,
An' hunger fer 'em somehow, with 'em allus on yer mind.

...and so on...

Holy shmoly.

 

[Angeline]

Re: Re: I hate this poem.

Holy shmoly.

don't i have good taste in what's bad? lol.

 

[Angeline]

Re: Re: Re: Re: I hate this poem.

I want to share your hatred of this poem. lol
It really is difficult to read. I was trying so hard to read the yer and ye and t' that I had no idea what he was talking about. Now, I know how some readers feel about my confusing and weird poetry.

No. They don't feel like this. Remember that poem I wrote about how I hate my cousin? That's how I hate this poem.

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: I hate this poem.

No. They don't feel like this. Remember that poem I wrote about how I hate my cousin? That's how I hate this poem.

Oh, I do remember your cousin hating poem. Is it still on lit?