Surt
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Im here to ask for an editor so someone can look over my story and see the major flaws with it which made it get rejected. If you don't like dont worry since im sure this will be the last time il do a story after being so disilussioned with the whole process, which i guess is my fault for getting into it. But still i want too get it posted on the site, Il post it here for everyone to see:...
This story is inspired by pictures I saw of Ziyi Zhang on the beach getting groped by her boyfriend, she was fully naked with her tits exposed and ass on display. So I recommend looking up those pictures and others of her and think off her while reading this story because the mom in this story is based on her. Everyone in the story is over 18. Hope you enjoy it and please give feedback, it’s my first time
It all started when my mom, a sexy Chinese woman in her mid-30’s with a figure would put most 20 year olds too shame got a divorce from my father, a up-tight traditional prudish man. The reasons for the break up were plenty; I once overheard my mother’s friends saying the main reason was his lack of sex drive. She had a long slender body with long black hair which went down to her back with china doll like facial features. Her breast where small yet so perfectly formed and her ass was small but so tight you would want to take bite out of it if you could.
After divorcing my father she stared to date this rich older white gentlemen. A more brazen man then my father this man would not think twice of grabbing my mother’s delicious cherry-like ass right in front of me in a kind of way I interpreted to show me who the owner of my mother’s delectable body was.
He would tell me I was a, “Very lucky guy for having such a gorgeous mother” and I would agree with a friendly nod, so as to not let on that I agreed more whole heartedly then I wanted him to know.
After a while this man started to influence my mother sense of style too, gone were the long frocks brought upon by my fathers regime and in were white tight shorts which showed a little of that delectable cheery-pie ass. Instead of the frumpy overall style shirts my mother now wore stylish and out-and-out sexy tank tops to accentuate her killer figure, I noticed and so did all my friends, much to my glee.
Everyday I would get compliments about her figure and recent turn into milf-dom. I did my best to try to blow off the comments and act like I was just shrugging each comment off, but in truth I loved every dirty lowdown filthy comments made by each of them. Comments such as “Oh dude I knew your mom was hot but I would bang the fucking shit out of her now, ill slap that tight ass so hard that she will be begging for more, she looks so dirty don’t she? Fuck those lips where just made for cock” Each time I heard them I tried my best not to get a raging hard-on which showed I precipitated each and everyone of these dirty comments.
One instance I know one of my friends remembers is when my mom walked into a room me and two of my friends were in, she was in a black tank top and white shorts. My friend gave me nudges when her back was turned, there eyes where fixated on her. They kept whispering to me, “wow your mom’s a fucking hottie.” She didn’t say a word, just smiling to us as she picked up the clothes lying around the room. Then she bended over in one of her sexy new pair of shorts, the look of every male went to that ass.
As things between my mom and the man got dirtier and dirtier, things around my house became much more exciting. There was an occasion when I was sitting with the rich white man, named Joseph, were he called me over to show me a gift he had brought for my mother.
“This is for something special” he said
“A night me and your mom won’t forget” I was thinking, what could it be? A ring I thought, but then to my surprise he brought out of his bag the sexiest pair of pink lacy bra and panties I have ever seen.
I didn’t know how to react; I just looked intently at the fine detail, the sexy little bows and dotted heart decorations on it, knowing full well my mom was going to be wearing this.
He looked at me, I looked at him and he said, “Well?
” I said, “Umm She will love it.”
Not thinking that I just told my moms boyfriend that the sexy pair of bra and panties he brought for her will be loved by her, I walked off to ‘precipitate’ this exchange and the thoughts running in my head in the bedroom before I exploded.
Another incident happened when I was on my way to the bathroom one morning when I suddenly saw my mom walk out of the bathroom in a bathrobe with a slightly embarrassed smile briskly walking into her bedroom, there was enough cleavage on show from her that I was able to tell that she has nothing on underneath. I thought to myself, “Hmm what was that all about” when I saw Joseph step put with only a towel to cover him and with a smile on his face which could be seen a mile off.
He walked up to me, slapped me on the shoulder and said “Fantastic day today!” and walked into the same bedroom my mom was in. Only when I walked into the bathroom did I see the clear proof of Joseph’s smile, there in front of me on the shower was some hand prints and when I looked closer, tit and face prints of a woman. Joseph just fucked my mom in the shower. I had to spend a few extra minutes in the bedroom alone that day so I would function properly for the rest of the day.
Then came the incident which stays with me to this day, something so mind-blowingly amazing I could think of it now and need an hour alone in the bedroom.
It was a Hot and dry Sunday; I woke up and noticed mom and Joseph not awake. I saw that the mostly shut and sealed off bedroom door was open ever so slightly today. I took a peak inside and there was the most amazing site I have ever seen in my entire life, my mom lying down face first, buck naked with her ass up in the air looking more temptating then a whole pool of ice-cream covered with all the delicious red cheery you could suck on.
I could tell, she was all cummed out from the rampant sex those two must engage in on a daily bases. I tried many times to see or hear the two have sex, but their door was always locked shut and only some light moans can be heard and those could only be heard by putting my ear on the door.
This was the first time I seen her naked and it was amazing, even better then expected, it took all my willpower not to go in there and grab all she had on offer. While I was in full on jacking-off mode I saw a figure rise from the sheets, there was Joseph lying sideways on top of my mom also fully naked. He was looking at her admiring the fine work he had done on her, if I looked carefully enough I could see cum stains on the sheets and on her.
He rubbed her back softly, and then grabbed a good handful of my mom’s tight ass. Squeezing and rubbing it with his large hands, I could not believe what luck I had to see this moment. After a bit more rubs he slapped her ass hard as in to awake her as she was half asleep, she looked at him in a daze, just from the look in his eyes you could tell what he wanted.
At first she seemed nonchalant to his groping, possibly because she’s used to this, he then got on top and started pounding her ass. I was in heaven at this point; I was watching her get her ass pounded hard. The bed rocked up and down a little as Joseph kept thrusting his cock into her tight asshole. Getting down to her neck to give her some kisses, I was amazed at seeing my mother being used in a way I was not accustomed to, a sex object. While his giant cock was going hard into her tight delicate ass, he would give some light slaps to her ass while also coping a feel of that delish ass.
After tiring of fucking her in the ass, he turned her over and put his cock in her pussy. Thrusting up and down he want down to kiss her delicate lite lips with dirty slobbering kisses, almost as if he was a bit mad. He went down on her neck and gave kisses which looked a bit like he was biting her. My mom was now moaning and also looked to be in a bit of pain, I was too excited to care, I was just enjoying the moment.
Then came some words from that shock me up a lot,
“You like that you dirty bitch? Want me to go deeper you little slut whore? Yeah fuck that tight pussy, take it all you dirty cunt, Is it too much? Fuck you bitch I want you to take it all, you’re my lil fuck doll”
He was talking dirty but in such a way it could be thought off as overly aggressive, he kept going with the dirty insults. He put his hands on her tits and felt them up forcefully, taking big sucks while holding the tits so tight they must have put her in some pain. Her face was grimacing at this point.
After a bit of rough sex he stopped, looked at her and said,
“Come on I want you to do it”
“But I never done it before” she replied
“Come on I know you can, I want you to know get on your fucking knees and giving me a fucking blowjob.”
After this shocking admission, he nudged her off the bed and sat on the edge of the bed at such an angle I could see him. My mom to my shock was doing his every bidding against his wishes like a slave, this is not a way I seen her before and it was an amazing turn-on seeing her do this. She was on her knees looking at his cock, hesitant and unsure. He got a cross look on his face and snapped “Come on and suck it woman.” She put those lips around it, softly and first and then fully committed and put most of it in.
Sucking back of forth, Joseph got a look of total euphoria on his face. “That’s my girl” he said while rubbing her hair. While getting out-of-my-mind excited while looking at my mom’s arched back and lips sucking a cock, Joseph saw me out the corner of his eye. My mom stopped and asked him if everything was ok, he kept telling her to suck on, that was my cue to leave.
I could not believe what I just saw, it was so unbelievable. It was something which could keep me going for months, maybe years. Later on that day in the living room, they didn’t look anything like the abusive couple I saw in the bedroom; with an engagement ring on her finger she could have not be happier.
When sitting down together with Joseph later on that day, I was nervous because he knew I watched them have sex. But when my mom left to go get dinner and was out of sight, Joseph came in a bit close to me and said,
“Enjoy the show last night?”
I nodded in nervous approval. He smiled his big grin and said,
“You should have seen the encore.”
This story is inspired by pictures I saw of Ziyi Zhang on the beach getting groped by her boyfriend, she was fully naked with her tits exposed and ass on display. So I recommend looking up those pictures and others of her and think off her while reading this story because the mom in this story is based on her. Everyone in the story is over 18. Hope you enjoy it and please give feedback, it’s my first time
It all started when my mom, a sexy Chinese woman in her mid-30’s with a figure would put most 20 year olds too shame got a divorce from my father, a up-tight traditional prudish man. The reasons for the break up were plenty; I once overheard my mother’s friends saying the main reason was his lack of sex drive. She had a long slender body with long black hair which went down to her back with china doll like facial features. Her breast where small yet so perfectly formed and her ass was small but so tight you would want to take bite out of it if you could.
After divorcing my father she stared to date this rich older white gentlemen. A more brazen man then my father this man would not think twice of grabbing my mother’s delicious cherry-like ass right in front of me in a kind of way I interpreted to show me who the owner of my mother’s delectable body was.
He would tell me I was a, “Very lucky guy for having such a gorgeous mother” and I would agree with a friendly nod, so as to not let on that I agreed more whole heartedly then I wanted him to know.
After a while this man started to influence my mother sense of style too, gone were the long frocks brought upon by my fathers regime and in were white tight shorts which showed a little of that delectable cheery-pie ass. Instead of the frumpy overall style shirts my mother now wore stylish and out-and-out sexy tank tops to accentuate her killer figure, I noticed and so did all my friends, much to my glee.
Everyday I would get compliments about her figure and recent turn into milf-dom. I did my best to try to blow off the comments and act like I was just shrugging each comment off, but in truth I loved every dirty lowdown filthy comments made by each of them. Comments such as “Oh dude I knew your mom was hot but I would bang the fucking shit out of her now, ill slap that tight ass so hard that she will be begging for more, she looks so dirty don’t she? Fuck those lips where just made for cock” Each time I heard them I tried my best not to get a raging hard-on which showed I precipitated each and everyone of these dirty comments.
One instance I know one of my friends remembers is when my mom walked into a room me and two of my friends were in, she was in a black tank top and white shorts. My friend gave me nudges when her back was turned, there eyes where fixated on her. They kept whispering to me, “wow your mom’s a fucking hottie.” She didn’t say a word, just smiling to us as she picked up the clothes lying around the room. Then she bended over in one of her sexy new pair of shorts, the look of every male went to that ass.
As things between my mom and the man got dirtier and dirtier, things around my house became much more exciting. There was an occasion when I was sitting with the rich white man, named Joseph, were he called me over to show me a gift he had brought for my mother.
“This is for something special” he said
“A night me and your mom won’t forget” I was thinking, what could it be? A ring I thought, but then to my surprise he brought out of his bag the sexiest pair of pink lacy bra and panties I have ever seen.
I didn’t know how to react; I just looked intently at the fine detail, the sexy little bows and dotted heart decorations on it, knowing full well my mom was going to be wearing this.
He looked at me, I looked at him and he said, “Well?
” I said, “Umm She will love it.”
Not thinking that I just told my moms boyfriend that the sexy pair of bra and panties he brought for her will be loved by her, I walked off to ‘precipitate’ this exchange and the thoughts running in my head in the bedroom before I exploded.
Another incident happened when I was on my way to the bathroom one morning when I suddenly saw my mom walk out of the bathroom in a bathrobe with a slightly embarrassed smile briskly walking into her bedroom, there was enough cleavage on show from her that I was able to tell that she has nothing on underneath. I thought to myself, “Hmm what was that all about” when I saw Joseph step put with only a towel to cover him and with a smile on his face which could be seen a mile off.
He walked up to me, slapped me on the shoulder and said “Fantastic day today!” and walked into the same bedroom my mom was in. Only when I walked into the bathroom did I see the clear proof of Joseph’s smile, there in front of me on the shower was some hand prints and when I looked closer, tit and face prints of a woman. Joseph just fucked my mom in the shower. I had to spend a few extra minutes in the bedroom alone that day so I would function properly for the rest of the day.
Then came the incident which stays with me to this day, something so mind-blowingly amazing I could think of it now and need an hour alone in the bedroom.
It was a Hot and dry Sunday; I woke up and noticed mom and Joseph not awake. I saw that the mostly shut and sealed off bedroom door was open ever so slightly today. I took a peak inside and there was the most amazing site I have ever seen in my entire life, my mom lying down face first, buck naked with her ass up in the air looking more temptating then a whole pool of ice-cream covered with all the delicious red cheery you could suck on.
I could tell, she was all cummed out from the rampant sex those two must engage in on a daily bases. I tried many times to see or hear the two have sex, but their door was always locked shut and only some light moans can be heard and those could only be heard by putting my ear on the door.
This was the first time I seen her naked and it was amazing, even better then expected, it took all my willpower not to go in there and grab all she had on offer. While I was in full on jacking-off mode I saw a figure rise from the sheets, there was Joseph lying sideways on top of my mom also fully naked. He was looking at her admiring the fine work he had done on her, if I looked carefully enough I could see cum stains on the sheets and on her.
He rubbed her back softly, and then grabbed a good handful of my mom’s tight ass. Squeezing and rubbing it with his large hands, I could not believe what luck I had to see this moment. After a bit more rubs he slapped her ass hard as in to awake her as she was half asleep, she looked at him in a daze, just from the look in his eyes you could tell what he wanted.
At first she seemed nonchalant to his groping, possibly because she’s used to this, he then got on top and started pounding her ass. I was in heaven at this point; I was watching her get her ass pounded hard. The bed rocked up and down a little as Joseph kept thrusting his cock into her tight asshole. Getting down to her neck to give her some kisses, I was amazed at seeing my mother being used in a way I was not accustomed to, a sex object. While his giant cock was going hard into her tight delicate ass, he would give some light slaps to her ass while also coping a feel of that delish ass.
After tiring of fucking her in the ass, he turned her over and put his cock in her pussy. Thrusting up and down he want down to kiss her delicate lite lips with dirty slobbering kisses, almost as if he was a bit mad. He went down on her neck and gave kisses which looked a bit like he was biting her. My mom was now moaning and also looked to be in a bit of pain, I was too excited to care, I was just enjoying the moment.
Then came some words from that shock me up a lot,
“You like that you dirty bitch? Want me to go deeper you little slut whore? Yeah fuck that tight pussy, take it all you dirty cunt, Is it too much? Fuck you bitch I want you to take it all, you’re my lil fuck doll”
He was talking dirty but in such a way it could be thought off as overly aggressive, he kept going with the dirty insults. He put his hands on her tits and felt them up forcefully, taking big sucks while holding the tits so tight they must have put her in some pain. Her face was grimacing at this point.
After a bit of rough sex he stopped, looked at her and said,
“Come on I want you to do it”
“But I never done it before” she replied
“Come on I know you can, I want you to know get on your fucking knees and giving me a fucking blowjob.”
After this shocking admission, he nudged her off the bed and sat on the edge of the bed at such an angle I could see him. My mom to my shock was doing his every bidding against his wishes like a slave, this is not a way I seen her before and it was an amazing turn-on seeing her do this. She was on her knees looking at his cock, hesitant and unsure. He got a cross look on his face and snapped “Come on and suck it woman.” She put those lips around it, softly and first and then fully committed and put most of it in.
Sucking back of forth, Joseph got a look of total euphoria on his face. “That’s my girl” he said while rubbing her hair. While getting out-of-my-mind excited while looking at my mom’s arched back and lips sucking a cock, Joseph saw me out the corner of his eye. My mom stopped and asked him if everything was ok, he kept telling her to suck on, that was my cue to leave.
I could not believe what I just saw, it was so unbelievable. It was something which could keep me going for months, maybe years. Later on that day in the living room, they didn’t look anything like the abusive couple I saw in the bedroom; with an engagement ring on her finger she could have not be happier.
When sitting down together with Joseph later on that day, I was nervous because he knew I watched them have sex. But when my mom left to go get dinner and was out of sight, Joseph came in a bit close to me and said,
“Enjoy the show last night?”
I nodded in nervous approval. He smiled his big grin and said,
“You should have seen the encore.”
