Dearest one

[Quest2U]

Derest one don't despair for you remain in my constant care
I am your companion when in fear
I validate your tears
I tuck you in whispering in your ear and tell you how
I'm not worthy of your splender my dear
How lovely you are, Ahhh fear
I am at home here
I bathe you with haunts and penetrate your thoughts
my temptation you have fought
Your olive skin smooth breast plump the ripest from the tree
I must pluck
nipples large asleep to be awaken by me for I am the prince
you see
I am kneading your heart, red lips part
nipples, brown and dark
pleading please.
Ahhh whats this a whispering greed?
A stream now saturates the moss
an eruption of dopamine
you must now pay the cost
gasping for air a bitten lip subsides
Huhhh quite sleep now my love
extinguish your thoughts while I lay here
beside you and refresh my thoughts
It is confirmed we are soul mates my sweet
eternally you and I shall meet
Fine comfort in knowing fathfull I will be
you are mine for many nights to be . . .
Loneliness

This is the second poem I have written in my life time, I still think it needs work especially grahmer comas ect ... an suggestions or coments would be great

 

[My Erotic Tale]

like I said <grin>

I like the concept of talking to loneliness