Dear Diary Ch.2

[-geisha.grrrl-]

Please check my story out, and feel free to leave comments here or in the story and please vote! Thanks for all the feedback, whatever it may be!

-gg

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204875

 

[-geisha.grrrl-]

I'm getting lower votes on this story than part one... I'm wondering what I've done wrong

 

[Joe Powers 1122]

Honestly I liked it better then the 1st chap....something about masterbation always works for me...

 

[spyro1123]

personally i like nitty gritty details, so i would have enjoyed this story more had you told me more about the way she was feeling, both physically and emotionally.

Hearing her fantacy is interesting, but there isnt a lot of conflict. I think it would make a more compelling story if she were feeling a little more conflicted about diddling herself in the middle of a public pool, even if she is getting off on the thought of someone watching she can still worry about what would happen if someone, like the cleaning lady came in.

All told i thought it was a pretty good story.

 

[-geisha.grrrl-]

Thank you both. I appreciate your feedback. Spyro did you like pt 1 better then?