Damn The Comments, Full Speed Ahead

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Yesterday many readers complained that I posted a cheating story to Loving Wives, two complained that it had no cheating in it. Some complained the latest stories (9 to date) aren't erotica. Some complained my stories are too short. And my 17K, 5 LIT page story has almost no reads.

Conclusion: Every reader has an opinion, and almost no one has anything to say beyond LOVE IT, HATE IT. 60-80 percent of readers like your stuff, and the rest demand you write like LOVECRAFT or PILOT or WHOMEVER they luv. I said, I WRITE FOR MY AUDIENCE NOT OTHER READERS. Lovecraft and Pilot are good writers AND there's nothing wrong with the diversity we bring. I fear LIT writers struggle against readers who hate diversity.

So I decided to serve my readers and feed their sickness as best I can. If readers wanna one bomb me to hell that's okay. Its not about them, its about the sick fucks who enjoy my style.

 

[SusanJillParker]

Yesterday many readers complained that I posted a cheating story to Loving Wives, two complained that it had no cheating in it. Some complained the latest stories (9 to date) aren't erotica. Some complained my stories are too short. And my 17K, 5 LIT page story has almost no reads.

Conclusion: Every reader has an opinion, and almost no one has anything to say beyond LOVE IT, HATE IT. 60-80 percent of readers like your stuff, and the rest demand you write like LOVECRAFT or PILOT or WHOMEVER they luv. I said, I WRITE FOR MY AUDIENCE NOT OTHER READERS. Lovecraft and Pilot are good writers AND there's nothing wrong with the diversity we bring. I fear LIT writers struggle against readers who hate diversity.

So I decided to serve my readers and feed their sickness as best I can. If readers wanna one bomb me to hell that's okay. Its not about them, its about the sick fucks who enjoy my style.

Before you can write for you audience, write for yourself. Write what you know. Write what you like. If you write it...eventually the readers will come.

I never really understood the Loving Wives category. All of my stories that I ever posted there were cheating wives. Maybe that explains my low scores in that category. I guess I'm supposed to post a romance story in Loving Wives for it not to be bashed.

"I love you Ron."

"I love you too, Audrey."

...and they lived happily ever after.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Before you can write for you audience, write for yourself. Write what you know. Write what you like. If you write it...eventually the readers will come.

I never really understood the Loving Wives category. All of my stories that I ever posted there were cheating wives. Maybe that explains my low scores in that category. I guess I'm supposed to post a romance story in Loving Wives for it not to be bashed.

"I love you Ron."

"I love you too, Audrey."

...and they lived happily ever after.

I agree. I treat LW as the general dump for what isn't specific enough for other categories. But I almost always post cheating heart stories there. I'm writing one where step daddy fucks his wife's daughter and her friends. Its kinda-sorta incest but always cheating.

 

[SusanJillParker]

I agree. I treat LW as the general dump for what isn't specific enough for other categories. But I almost always post cheating heart stories there. I'm writing one where step daddy fucks his wife's daughter and her friends. Its kinda-sorta incest but always cheating.

Cheating? Incest? Hardly.

Cheating and incest have now become the great American novel. Own the fact that a husband cheats on his wife. What man doesn't? I'm sure he has reason to leave her bed cold to heat up the bed of another woman.

"Honey. I'm going to my Bible reading class again. I'll be late again. We're reading the entire Bible again."

"Okay sweetie," said his wife.

"Thank you, Jesus," said her husband leaving to meet his lover.

Moreover, with his stepdaughter and her friends, no doubt, teasing and enticing the poor man by wearing sexy clothes and saying sexy things, they deserved Daddy sleeping with his daughter and with her friends.

If only more Americans would not only admit that they've had incestuous sex but also embrace having incestuous sex, it won't be long before we read about Bill Clinton admitting that he played cigar games with Chelsea.

"I did not have sex with my daughter but there was that one time with my unlit cigar..."

It won't be long before President Obama admits that he not only lusts over Malia and has peeped on her dressing and undressing while masturbating in the Oval Office.

"I, um, just peeped on my daughter to make sure she's safe. I do that twice a day. Once in the morning and once at night."

It won't be long that Hillary not only forgives her husband for having sex with Jennifer Flowers but admits that she had sex with her too.

Now there's a loving wives story (lol).

 

[49greg]

I've tried a couple of cheating wife LW stories with the predictable results, even for one with a semi-BTB ending. The subject is interesting, possibly because so many people have experienced it in real life. It seems half the guys I knew while I spent years working in a factory either cheated on their wives or had wives who cheated on them. (I fall into the latter category, my first not only cheated but then left me for her lover - and left her lover for yet someone else LOL.)

When I was stationed in Germany during my obligatory Army service, it seemed like half the guys who left their wives/girlfriends stateside cheated on them, and/or their wives cheated back home. Many of the other single guys had regular schatzis who thought they would be taken stateside and married when GI Joe Rotated back, and then after Joe left they called the company asking if he was back from his "Field Exercise" or Special Training. I really felt sorry for them.

Humans suck. But they do provide grist for a writer's mill.

I think eventually I'll try another cheating story and bask in the glow of the Troll Wrath. Maybe even I'll do a cheating hubby story.

 

[Desiremakesmeweak]

Perhaps I should recount for those particular readers, that version of the Greek story in which Pandora is made by Hephaestus and Athena on the orders of Zeus to punish Mankind and Prometheus for stealing fire from the gods to give to men - 'of her is that deadly race and tribe of women and female kind who live amongst mortal men to their great trouble, no helpmeets in poverty, but only in wealth.' (Hesiod).

Hesiod makes Pandora a different type of being than 'Mortal Mankind' - which is of course, similar to the Genesis elevated scholarly translation of 'Isha' (which is not 'Eve' but some kind of other being).

Nevertheless, 'Mankind' marries 'Pandora' (the word/name means 'possessing all gifts').

And the rest you know.

 

[SusanJillParker]

Perhaps I should recount for those particular readers, that version of the Greek story in which Pandora is made by Hephaestus and Athena on the orders of Zeus to punish Mankind and Prometheus for stealing fire from the gods to give to men - 'of her is that deadly race and tribe of women and female kind who live amongst mortal men to their great trouble, no helpmeets in poverty, but only in wealth.' (Hesiod).

Hesiod makes Pandora a different type of being than 'Mortal Mankind' - which is of course, similar to the Genesis elevated scholarly translation of 'Isha' (which is not 'Eve' but some kind of other being).

Nevertheless, 'Mankind' marries 'Pandora' (the word/name means 'possessing all gifts').

And the rest you know.

As if they were psychic in their ability to see Literotica's Loving Wives category, leave it to the Greeks to be all seeing and all knowing.

Plutarch, Socrates, Aristotle, and Epicurus would be proud.