Daily Poetry Spinner Pick!

[WickedEve]

Yes, it's a Story Spinner, but on this board we'll call it a poetry spinner.
Anyway, I clicked on the poetry spinner in the erotic poetry section and this the poem it gave me:

Warm thoughts
by Meanderingpoet ©

The night steams around me
Misty hot, jungle heat
Fills my sacred abode
Perhaps, it’s only my imagination

No, definitely there is heat
I am damp with my own sweat
Tossing, turning
Urging sleep to come

The subtle, searing temperature
Drives worth dizzy delirium
Blankets thrown off
To bare skin to air

Even the air is scorching
If only from my thoughts
I glance over at the others
Free from this sweltering inferno

Well, I think the poetry spinner gave me a good poem. I checked out Meanderingpoet's member page and she has quite a few poems you may want to check out.

Click Here to Vote on this Poem!

 

[JUDO]

Okay, I wanna know who "the others" are, Meanderinpoet. Is this a sleepover, campout, trek in the jungles of S. America, or midnight after the orgy? Who are these people!?


- Judo

 

[Angeline]

I Like This!

I dunno who those other people are, but what a cool idea this is Eve. Exposure for the poet and a good way to give us an opportunity to read poems that would otherwise have escaped us. I'm goin for a spin now!

 

[WickedEve]

Re: I Like This!

I dunno who those other people are, but what a cool idea this is Eve. Exposure for the poet and a good way to give us an opportunity to read poems that would otherwise have escaped us. I'm goin for a spin now!

I'm pretty sure this idea was on another thread, but I couldn't find it. So I started a new one. And yes, it's great for poems that are lost in those big lists!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Oh great...

I go for a spin myself and I can't even understand half of mine!



Prayers: English Lather & der Dreck
by Jesus_CHRIST ©

His rampant rod copiously cumming
Into my willing hole.
My mellow mouth ardently humming
Around his holy pole.

How we delight to give each other
Such simple gifts of joy!
How else can one revere a lover,
Whose privates are one's toy?

We fuck with loins hard pressed to faces.
Ain't that the best of love?
God's blessed us with so many graces,
Fucking us from above!

Erhoere mein Gebet meine geliebte Goettin.
Ich liege in Demut auf meinem Ruecken vor Dir.
Mein armseliges Gesicht ist Dein heiliger Altar.
Setze Dich auf ihn und segne mich, Goettin.
Meine Zunge ist es nicht wert Dich zu beruehren,
aber Du bist so nett, so grosszuegig.
Bitte, willst Du Deinem minderwertigen,
nutzlosen, dummen, barbarischen Muschisklaven nicht verzeihen?
Komm Goettin, akzeptiere mein wertloses Geschenk fuer Dich.
Bitte komm, setze Dich, und komm auf meinem Gesicht.
Dein gluecklicher Wurm, Goettin

 

[WickedEve]

What's all that written up under the poem?
Lauren, you aren't allowed to use the spinner anymore!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

I think my spinner might be broken...

 

[WickedEve]

You broke it! I'm telling!
Lauren was using the spinner in a very naughty way, and broke it!
Lauren, it's not a joy toy.

 

[karmadog]

Re: English lather

I did that one on the title thread. I think we should just be glad that Jesus didn't get mad that he didn't make the toplist.

And more importantly, that he didn't get his dad to strike me dead, or beat me up or something.

 

[karmadog]

Hungry to know what Jesus had to say in German, I found out that he is a submissive little bastard by running him through Babelfish.

Erhoere my prayer my loved goddess. I lie in humility on my back before you. My poor face is your holy altar. Set you on it and segne me, for goddess. My tongue is to be affected it not worth you, but you are so nicely, so generous. Please, you do not want to forgive your inferior, useless, stupid, barbarian Muschisklaven? Come goddess, accept my worthless gift for you. Please come, set you, and come on my face. Your lucky worm, goddess

(Possibly) corrected translation.

Hear my prayer my loved goddess. In humility, I lie on my back before you. My ugly face is your holy altar. Sit on it and {spin} for me, goddess. My tongue shall be ridden though it is not worthy of you, but you are kind and generous. Please, don't you want to forgive you inferiou, useless stupid, barbarian, wordy mukluk? Come goddess, accept my worthless gift to you. Please come, have a seat, and come on my mug. Goddess, I am

Your lucky worm,

Jesus


Well, however it goes, that is some pretty bizarre shit. BTW, the stuff I changed in the corrected translation is shear invention. I have no idea whatsoever what this guy meant.

 

[Meanderingpoet]

Gasp! That's my poem!

Hi there, I am Emily. Thank you for reading my poem. The others are other people in general. At least it is meant that way. I wrote the poem on a very sultry night with my very quiet vibrator while my room mate and her boyfriend slept 5 feet away. That's also the others. I wanted to keep it very general and vague though in the poem.

Thanks again!
Emily

 

[karmadog]

with my very quiet vibrator while my room mate and her boyfriend slept 5 feet away.

Pretended to sleep, maybe?

I lost my virginity the first time in a similar situation. The next day, everybody on the planet knew. But I didn't care, I told everybody just how thickly the roommates bra was padded. She shouldn't have left it laying on the floor. LOL

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Pretended to sleep, maybe?

I lost my virginity the first time in a similar situation. The next day, everybody on the planet knew. But I didn't care, I told everybody just how thickly the roommates bra was padded. She shouldn't have left it laying on the floor. LOL

LOL

I can ask my brother to translate that for you, if you really want to know... But I think you're version might be better LOL

 

[JUDO]

Re: Gasp! That's my poem!

Hi there, I am Emily. Thank you for reading my poem. The others are other people in general. At least it is meant that way. I wrote the poem on a very sultry night with my very quiet vibrator while my room mate and her boyfriend slept 5 feet away. That's also the others. I wanted to keep it very general and vague though in the poem.

Thanks again!
Emily

MP -

Yeh! Thanks for posting with us! You are always welcome here. Please look around, I think you'll find some pretty cool poetry challenges, info and some pretty okay folks as well.

Welcome to the Poetry forum!


- Judo

PS - Thanks for telling me who those pesky "others" were.

 

[Sweetwood]

Translation

German mystery man said in his Gedicht:

Erhoere mein Gebet meine geliebte Goettin.
Ich liege in Demut auf meinem Ruecken vor Dir.
Mein armseliges Gesicht ist Dein heiliger Altar.
Setze Dich auf ihn und segne mich, Goettin.
Meine Zunge ist es nicht wert Dich zu beruehren,
aber Du bist so nett, so grosszuegig.
Bitte, willst Du Deinem minderwertigen,
nutzlosen, dummen, barbarischen Muschisklaven nicht verzeihen?
Komm Goettin, akzeptiere mein wertloses Geschenk fuer Dich.
Bitte komm, setze Dich, und komm auf meinem Gesicht.
Dein gluecklicher Wurm, Goettin

Hear my prayers my beloved Goddess.
I lie on my back in humility before you.
My unworthy face is your holy altar.
Sit on it and bless me, Goddess.
My tongue unworthy to touch you,
But you are so nice, so generous.
Please, won't you forgive your low value,
useless, stupid, barbaric pussyslave?
Come Goddess, accapt my worthless gift for you.
Please come and sit and cum on my face
Your happy worm, Goddess.

On second thought maybe I shouldn't have translated it. It is so bad!!!!!!! Yikes..... it's even worse in german. Maybe I'm going to start posting german poetry here. You'd never know.

Sweetdeutsch

Awhh shucks forgot to translate one line.

 

[karmadog]

So "Muschlisklaven" means "pussyslave". Thank God I didn't ask my Grandmother what that meant! Family reunions would have been a tad strained.

I still think my "translation" to "useless, stupid, wordy, barbarian mukluk" lends a deeper character to the poem. A sort of bad weather/George Will tone, if you will. But I don't know. Isn't "der Dreck" exactly what I think it means?

Maybe this is a self-mocking poem. "English Lather..."

Still...

 

[WickedEve]

So "Muschlisklaven" means "pussyslave". Thank God I didn't ask my Grandmother what that meant! Family reunions would have been a tad strained.

What a way to start my morning! Kdog, you're killing me! LOL

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Gasp! That's my poem!

Hi there, I am Emily. Thank you for reading my poem. The others are other people in general. At least it is meant that way. I wrote the poem on a very sultry night with my very quiet vibrator while my room mate and her boyfriend slept 5 feet away. That's also the others. I wanted to keep it very general and vague though in the poem.

Thanks again!
Emily

Hope you post more, you naughty girl!

 

[Sweetwood]

Der Dreck

Der Dreck=the dirt - literally

Der letzte Dreck = the final quitessential ass of the world

take you pick

Sweetdreck

 

[WickedEve]

Playing spin the poem and got a Mystery...

A Dance
by ©

a look of desire reflects in soft green eyes
a soft smile spreads across sensuous lips
a smouldering lust burning deep within

hand slowly trailing between her breasts
caressing the soft curves of her belly
gently resting on her rounded hip

fingertips play on her taut thighs
hips rock slowly in small circles
holding his powerful gaze

painted nails tracing upturned breasts
nipples pushing out into firm buds
straining the confining fabric

breasts with harden tips arch at him
swollen in anticipation of a touch
she pauses just out of reach

her fragrance weaves its way through him
her dance is he knows for him alone
she sees just him her eyes afire

she melts in true submission to her knees
her wrists crossed she lifts her arms
begging for her Master’s touch

No author name on this one, and no way to vote, and when you click on bio, it says "this member does not exist."
Maybe it's that mysterious U.P. Or it could be Laurel hiding her identity. I love a mystery!

 

[JUDO]

So "Muschlisklaven" means "pussyslave". Thank God I didn't ask my Grandmother what that meant! Family reunions would have been a tad strained.

Okay, okay, okay...whew! I think the neighbors already called the cops. Kdog, don't you have a governor on that humor box of yours. Jesus! I laughed so loud, I think neighbor Jim had thought I'd finally lost it!

Still laughing (now my face hurts).

- Judo

 

[WickedEve]

does anyone get this?

The Master Commands
by Andie ©

When we got first to chatting , you i
were the person to say that you
were here to be commanded ,
whatever I desired , so then came
the chance of my wildest fantasies
to realized , the wild thoughts
flew through my mind at that
moment , of what I was going
to have you do .

Then for me to feast on your lovely ii
body , did I have you remove all
your clothing in sensual dance like
movements, then did I go fetch
the handcuffs and the cane, of
which you showed signs of fear
at first, but once I had handcuffed
your hands behind your back, I
then had you laughing, for I did
say, the handcuffs were there
to prevent you from playing
with yourself.

For the desire to see more of iii
your lovely bush and ass, I had
seen as you removed all your
clothing, then came a command
with a harsher edge to it, for you
to be bending the over that plush
chair ,set in the middle of the room,
for then did I get the view of views,
I been wanting to see until now, for

Lovely ass, did I see the little rosette
'winking' of sorts to me, then came
a command, for which was asked
for you to wet a finger with your
sensual mouth, then for it to be
inserted in the rosette hole, of
which you did , then slowly did
a smile come to you face, as you
inserted it further in , then for
my pleasure, did I bush the cane
near the area of the little rosette.

Then on hands and knees, do I crawl
towards my reward, then from then
does my tongue wander, towards your
clit, then do I start to feel your wetness
slide down my tongue, then further do I
flicker my tongue inside your bush, then
more my tongue moves inside you, the waves
travel along your body at the point of
no return for both us.

Then thanks comes from both
for such a great experience,
then both ourselves exit the
virtual room.

Does "i" and "ii" and "iii" have a special meaning? Lowercase Roman numerals?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

i

ii

iii

io

oio

iiiiioiiiii

I think you were the one who came up with the explanation, Eve...

 

[WickedEve]

Playing spin the poem and...

...got something I really like! If you enjoy this poem as much as I do, please take the time to vote, and post or send feedback.

Ode to College Beauty on a Warm Spring Day
by Havocman ©

Where do they come from
These nimble young sprites
Their hair in the wind flowing
Their laughter like crystal rain
As they stroll by me unknowing
The fires their passage flames
Their soft creamy skin glowing
Like the most precious porcelain
Hips swaying gently side to side
Thighs rubbing sweetly together
As they mount library steps swiftly
Skirts caught by breezes lifted
Showing glimpses of paradise
To the well traveled eye
Nymphs prancing about gaily
Tempting unwary mortals
Like Shakespearean characters
Playing havoc with men's hearts
Lingering on the quad grasses
On blankets or upon jackets
Deep in study or teasing
All males with the simple
Act of eating an apple
My soul cries out to them
Travel no further through time
Nay pause here a moment
In your youth in your freshness
Clutching books to ripe bosoms
With the world unexplored
Pass not the gates of knowledge
Of what your actions can do
Stay innocent and unknowing
Of the turmoil created
By the crossing of your legs
By the sound of your breathing
By the smell of your skin
Caught on the wind as you
Pass by the perch of this
Smiling man on the bench

 

[karmadog]

I kind of liked it too, but if I ever hear about creamy, porcelain skin again...