Dad team fucks his daughter with her boyfriend!

[thehotchip]

I like the idea of a dad and daughter team (the daughter is 18) who indulge in hot sex now that the mother has moved out. The sex is legitimate on both the daughter and dad's side. Only, the daughter has a boyfriend, also 18, who uncovers the truth about what is happening. He is at first repelled by the idea and breaks up with the girl.

However, after some chats with her dad about what exactly goes on between them, the boyfriend comes to terms with the idea and even begins to find it sexy. In the end, both the boyfriend and dad engage in team-fucking the girl.

Anyone else think this is a hot subject for a story?

 

[Shendude]

Intriguing.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I really like that idea.

 

[Blangis]

Very nice

 

[Texguy84]

I have to support any idea where a girl gets "Team-fucked". That's got to be my new favorite word.

 

[thehotchip]

tips/ ideas/ input?

Thanks for the comments of enthusiasm!

I was just wondering if anyone might have any tips on how to make this story as realistic as possible, especially in regards to the boyfriend and his reaction. I don't want him to be repelled by the idea of the father fucking the daughter, and then to suddenly come around to the idea over night. I want it to be a gradual process, although I'm not sure what key factors would make him change his mind and get turned on by the idea.

Also, I'd like to hear some suggestions for the descriptions of the three main characters. I appreciate all input.

Thanks again!

 

[BlackSnake]

I was actually thinking of a little variation to you idea.

The dad and daughter live together after the dad divorces the mother. Both have felt repressed by the mother.

The dad and daughter have to get their rules straight to live together. The dad goes for a more open dialog with his daughter. He wants the best for his daughter, and knows that she has been sneaking around to have sex with her boyfriend in order to keep the mother from finding out. The dad tells his daughter that he don't want her to sneak around to have sex. His thing is for her to have her boyfriend(s) to use a condom when they have sex.

The daughter agrees, and also tells the father that she is find with him dating. He is a good looking man, and is able to dates.

Both dad and daughter are having sex with their dates in their new place. The daughter's boyfriend like the dad now, because he likes talking about sex even if its about his own daughter. The daughter also like that she is able to talk freely about sex with her dad and boyfriend.

Father and daughter conversation about their sex lives leads to sex. They resolve the issue to just casual sex between the two of them, since they both like having lots of sex.

The boyfriend likes how liberal the dad is and has the kinky thought in his head about the father teaming with him to have sex with the daughter. The boyfriend doesn't know that the father and daughter have already been having casual sex.

The boyfriend brings it up to the daughter, saying that he bet that her dad would like to screw her, and how cool it would be to a little orgy. The daughter plays along, but doesn't agree or disagree with the boyfriend.

When the boyfriend is not around, she tells her father what her boyfriend has been talking to her about, and she adds that she'd like to have the both of them at the same time. The father likes the idea too, and says that they should just wait and see what happens.

The boyfriend is over and talking about how good sex is with the daughter, and is asking the father how he'd fuck the daughter if he could. The boyfriend is groping the daughter while the father talks about what he do. The father adds, but with a condom, of course.

The boyfriend coax the father every step of the way into having sex with the daughter.

 

[Blangis]

Personally I'd just have a scenario where the daughter seems quite reluctant sexually to the boyfriend, but since she's a very good looking lady he's willing to have a bit of patience but is always nagging her all the same, really, really desperate to knob her and all. Common, I'd say. The daughter, embroiled in a sexual relationship with her conoisseur father is just having a bit of fun leading him about, again, not uncommon, the sex with the father bit aside. So when finally the Father and Daughter ensure they're caught in the act (Maybe you could use a quite elaborate, perilous setting, maybe the pair go out on a date to a restaurant, she gets up and leaves for the lavatory, he grows impatient, has a look about and find her getting reamed by her Dad behind a skip or something), they just play the 'Wouldn't you just love to nail my daughter? This is your only chance, if you don't do it now, you'll never get to do it, you fuck her brains out with me now, you can fuck her brains out whenever you please' kind of thing.

Course, having thought she was frigid, being turned on by the idea that she isn't and indeed the view of her irresistible body under some harsh treatment, and indeed his own eagerness to have a bit of a rumble himself, he jumps right in, reluctantly at first. I remember I watched the TV show 'Curb Your Enthusiasm' where Larry visits some therapy session about sex, and there's this woman who tells of her incestuous experiences as a girl, getting 'team fucked' but her uncle and some other male family member, and they were always arguing whilst nailing her, personally I found that idea quite attractive! If I were to write a story as your described, I'd definitely have a bit of Father/Boyfriend rivalry

Course, setting could be a touch more friendly, but since the whole thing plays on naughtiness may as well add a bit more to the thing, also I'd say it's pretty unique to take a lady out on a date and find she's been fucking her father during her lavvy breaks.

 

[emz]

thats a great idea

 

[thehotchip]

I really like the suggestions so far, especially the idea of Father/ Boyfriend rivalry. That's really hot!

So, to the descriptions of the characters. What do these people look like? Eye coliur, hair colour, build, weight, etc? Of course I have my own ideas for every aspect of this story, but I'd still enjoy hearing some more input.

Thanks!

 

[BlackSnake]

I really like the suggestions so far, especially the idea of Father/ Boyfriend rivalry. That's really hot!

So, to the descriptions of the characters. What do these people look like? Eye coliur, hair colour, build, weight, etc? Of course I have my own ideas for every aspect of this story, but I'd still enjoy hearing some more input.

Thanks!

How about the father being a slim man in his forties, his dark hair graying at the temple cut in a high top fade. He jaw square and his firm body showing the benefits of his obsessive health habits.

 

[thehotchip]

Okay!

How about the daughter and her boyfriend?

I'd also like, prior to the sex, or perhaps later on, a part in the story where the father and boyfriend are naked in each other's presence - either in the showers after going to the gym together, or some likewise situation, wherein the typical male competetive streak comes out and they size each other up, make comments, argue etc. I'd like suggestions as to how, realisticly, this part of the story could arise, and what dialogue might transpire between the father and boyfriend.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I have to support any idea where a girl gets "Team-fucked". That's got to be my new favorite word.

Go find Capt and cum team-fuck me.

 

[Blangis]

I'd have the daughter as quite petite to highlight her age and status, if you want her as 18 and all, so short, small breasts, quite lovely, and I'd have her as a brunette too but that's just my preference

Boyfriend I'd just have a John Everyman type thing, well groomed, bit poncy, probably listens to 50 Cent, overall pretty generic, kind of guy a reader could easily adapt the position of in imagination. Also I'd say it's important to give him a member that is the very definition of average, six inches or something, and I'd use that to make the father look comparitively powerful, since he has control over his daughter he should really be the Alpha Male, the boyfriend would feel insecure around him and so compensate by being a bit pushy and challenging (Course, it's his girlfriend and his first time defiling her as well, the father is an affront and all), which would be handy for the rivalry. It would also establish further perhaps that the daughter is unlikely to be tempted away from her Father any time soon and is just exploiting young boys for her own pleasures, I'd find that quite a nice aside

I'd have the Dad in the his forties, slightly overweight and balding, hirsute, quite an intimidating demeanor and appearance overall, as I mentioned with a member of impressive dimensions and a highly developed lover. Although perhaps threatening normally, with his daughter he's remarkably inviting and cheerful which I feel would make the scenario a bit more realistic, the boyfriend would perhaps be reassured by this change in character and feel less threatened to join in, perhaps seeing it as an opportunity to further establish himself in the relationship with the daughter, in some backwards way, by gaining some favor with the father as well, although still both will be looking to get their ends off and will demand to be the decision maker in terms of positions etc... The daughter impassioned just allows them to do their thing.

 

[Texguy84]

Go find Capt and cum team-fuck me.

Rightaway!

 

[thehotchip]

I was also wondering from who's point of view the story should be told? I was thinking of an overall 3rd person narrative, so as to best describe the feelings/ thoughts of all 3 main characters and any secondary characters I may think up, but I'm open to suggestions?

 

[thehotchip]

Just read the previous posts. In regards to the way the characters look, I think I prefer the father being a fit and healthy 40 year old, with a good body and stern, square-jawed appearence, so he looks stern and strong, as one poster said; rather than over-weight and balding. I want this story to be realistic, but it IS erotica - I want people to be turned on, not repulsed by fat, bald men haha. So, a good-looking-in-a-stern-way father, together with a lovely petite, brunette daughter.

 

[BlackSnake]

You can always mention that the father has something he conciders a flaw, like a boney nose or something.

 

[thehotchip]

That's perfectly feasable.

I'd just like to raise another point I posted earlier, but which seems to have been overlooked:


I'd also like, prior to the sex, or perhaps later on, a part in the story where the father and boyfriend are naked in each other's presence - either in the showers after going to the gym together, or some likewise situation, wherein the typical male competetive streak comes out and they size each other up, make comments, argue etc. I'd like suggestions as to how, realisticly, this part of the story could arise, and what dialogue might transpire between the father and boyfriend.

 

[Blangis]

I can't account for the female readers obviously but in my case the idea of the father having a somewhat repulsive exterior certainly stirs the old emotions, perhaps it's just my tastes. Suppose it kind of highlights the burgeoning charms of the girl and makes the sex perhaps even more forbidden and unusual, allowing the possibilities of speculating as to why this relationship developed that are more intriguing, rather than two attractive people find each other attractive and then fuck.

That film, "The Ballad of Jack and Rose" for example was extremly arousing I thought, a father and daughter isolated with each develop a bond and relationship so strong that the only way they could really further it was through sex, although in that of course Jack can't bring himself to defile his willing daughter, despite the obvious inclinations.

 

[thehotchip]

okay.

any response to my previous post?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Rightaway!

I'm starting to like you legal young boys more and more.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I was also wondering from who's point of view the story should be told? I was thinking of an overall 3rd person narrative, so as to best describe the feelings/ thoughts of all 3 main characters and any secondary characters I may think up, but I'm open to suggestions?

Typically, I prefer writing in 3rd person for the very fact that a character can't know how other characters feel!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

That's perfectly feasable.

I'd just like to raise another point I posted earlier, but which seems to have been overlooked:


I'd also like, prior to the sex, or perhaps later on, a part in the story where the father and boyfriend are naked in each other's presence - either in the showers after going to the gym together, or some likewise situation, wherein the typical male competetive streak comes out and they size each other up, make comments, argue etc. I'd like suggestions as to how, realisticly, this part of the story could arise, and what dialogue might transpire between the father and boyfriend.

It sounds to me like you're developing quite a "full" story, and not a "one scene wank". Depending on how long you truly make it, and how detailed, I'd say have the father and boyfriend at the gym, etc., some point after the boyfriend's knowledge of the situation (maybe he even seeks out the dad wanting to find out why he's "taking advantage of his daughter"-in the boyfriend's eyes) but before he "joins in". You could have him deal with the "turmoil" of his knowledge and that eventually his anger smooths away to acceptance.

 

[thehotchip]

How about this idea: the father and boyfriend get really carried away while double-teaming the girl and get to a point where they're betting on who will be the first to get her pregnant. They fuck her over and over again, each one not wearing any protection, trying to prove they can knock her up, thus making themselves the real Alpha male. It's a horny idea, I think, but perhaps not too realistic.

Should I include this?