Cult Ritual Incest

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I tried writing it myself, but failed. Here goes with my description:

A beautiful girl hangs out with her girlfriends every day. She bitches about her older brother with them, and talks about boys with them, and all that normal stuff.

Every Sunday night, though, they go out into the woods and participate in cult activities. Like Wicca or some generic thing. The girl is an initiate, and they are training her in the ways of bisexual fun...

One night, she is ready for full membership, so they sensually remove her clothing, paint strange patterns with drug-laced paint all over her naked body, and hump each other as they stare at her, all naked like her. Tonight she is to be the Triple Goddess, and go down into a dank cave to a small chamber in the back, lined with animal skins, to get fucked by the Horned God.

She walks inside it trembling, panting as she anticipates meeting the leader of this cult, and taking his cock. Then he comes inside, wearing a pair of antlers, and it turns out to be her brother. She is surprised, and angered that her dorky older brother is the one in charge of her new way to rebel against her church-going family. But he tells her and persuades her to go on and submit to him for the ritual, reminding her of the significance, until she finally relents and takes his cock any way he wants it.

The ritual is meant to make the women submissive to men, so it is a male dom story.

Any takers?
 
Dunno

Well its a very interesting idea, although I dunno much about male dom fantasies, would a male dom use drugs to help her submit or would he slap her around a bit and make her fear him ? Not trying to be funny, i honeslt just dunno.

I would say yes i could write it but the male dom thing kinda throws me off a bit, maybe explain a bit more what ya want in that area ?
 
Well its a very interesting idea, although I dunno much about male dom fantasies, would a male dom use drugs to help her submit or would he slap her around a bit and make her fear him ? Not trying to be funny, i honeslt just dunno.

I would say yes i could write it but the male dom thing kinda throws me off a bit, maybe explain a bit more what ya want in that area ?

Well, it's like a revenge fantasy of sorts. I have this one sister who constantly bitches at me, and a fantasy that has the big brother put her "in her place," so to speak, appeals to me.

So, maybe drugs, maybe slapping. Which ever feels in character.

I tried writing this, but it came out wrong, due to not having a character for the girl or her friends.


Another thought: One could open this tale with the girls in the coven fucking in the church restrooms, in that big handicapped stall. ^^ Just a thought.

EDIT: You could have her be extremely horny due to the paint-drugs. So yeah, drugs are the thing to use. She can no longer think or argue with the sweeping statements he makes and just submits, accepting her big brother as her god.
 
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Ok, lemme do a little research on it and i'll get back to you, just to see if it's something I can put together.
 
Ok i think i can manage, did you want to review the story before I submit it ?
 
Finished editing it for you.

Feel free to upload it whenever you want.

I like your take on it a bit better than my own, though I miss the possibility of merely seducing the bitch sister with a combination of mythic high-sounding words and drugs soaking into her skin. Now it reads like a straight-up mindcontrol story. I don't mind that, but still, maybe next time I can manage something like that myself.

Here's to hoping I can get you to edit a story of my own in return... :3 *working on a romantic one myself*
 
Sure dude, whenever ya finish it just send it to me and i'll take a look at it and see what ya got.
 
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