Cuckold / Voyeurism Question

[Serban]

Heya All,

I'm writing my first real cuckold themed story, and I'm just looking for a bit of public opinion.

For a bit of back story, it is about:

"It's the night of romantic consummation for a loving couple. They sneak up to the roof of their hotel, jimmy open the lock on the pool and have a bit of romancing. A bit of pool play, some kinky tie up, but just as things are about to get serious - we're missing a condom. Husband runs off to get one, but when he comes back, he finds himself locked off of the roof and can only watch the group of men around his tied up, blindfolded and gagged, naked wife."

The husband is obviously aghast at this, and has to watch as other men take his place. But the real question is - Should he masturbate to it? Or just look on in horror?


I've been toying with the idea a lot, but I haven't come to a solid answer. Originally, he was just going to probably sit down and in shock or something as the men leave, not seeing him behind the door, and then awkwardly try and keep the truth from his wife.

But at the same time, he might be sordid enough to use the terrible ordeal as a jerk-off show, in replacement for him getting to consummate his marriage.

I've put a poll on this post, but I'm new to the forum and not sure if it's worked.

 

[Hypoxia]

Depends on your target audience and intentions.

* IRL the husband would likely be horrified and would call hotel security and/or cops.
* In a revenge story he makes a point of tracking down and punishing the rapists.
* In an action-hero story he's an ex-SEAL; he kicks the door in and stomps ass.
* In an weak-wimp story he stands and watches but does nothing.
* In a cuck / wittol (willing wimp) story he watches and jerks off.
* In a BTB story he set it all up and hired the rapists to punish his cheating wife.

What do you want to happen next?

 

[Serban]

I'm suspending logic with the police or hotel reporting, maybe because it's embarrassing, or he doesn't think of it. No punishment is going to come to the rapists, and he's not going to fight or confront them.

He can't get through the door, doesn't bang on it or anything. He makes no effort to stop the sex (Not out of cowardice, but because that's the way I wrote it ) and it's not planned.

I'm just considering what might be the more popular or interesting aspect to add to this - Do people like the realism of a man breaking down as he watched, or the sordidness of him reluctantly getting off? Or should he get off, and when they've finished, should he have a go on her afterwards?

A point I put in the story was that his wife doesn't use any birth control, morning after or abortion things of any kind, which is why he ran off for a condom. None of these guys are using condoms, and right now, his wife doesn't even know it's strangers - she just thinks it's her husband being really good at sex because he's turned on by the romantic atmosphere and her sudden want for kinky tie-up play.

Maybe my question isn't that well put across and I might not be making a great deal of sense. It might be better to ask what makes a cuckold story interesting. What makes them more enjoyable? Is it the helplessness of the man, or his arousal by the situation? Is it the better sex the woman is having, or the enjoyment of the stranger getting a piece of something?

I don't really have a target audience, I write for myself and publish for fun. I just like to interact with people who might want to read it, and listen to what they might have to say.

Do you have an opinion on it, Hypoxia?

 

[FantasisingMale]

He would watch if it's a cuckold/hotwife story. He might not want it if it's not from his perspective. Or he might reluctantly start to enjoy it. Either way he would watch.

What should be the question is how does the wife feel as this happens?

 

[Hypoxia]

I have written exactly one story (Double Your Fun) featuring wittols and it was not well-received. I do not have insights into the psychology of a guy standing there helplessly vs jerking off. I listed the options that occurred to me. "Standing there helplessly" seems his LEAST likely reaction.

I don't buy that the women can't tell it's not her husband doing her. It's not pitch-black; he can see from the outside so she certainly could see who came into the pool area. Did she submit willingly, or by force, or trickery? In fact, did SHE setup the gang-bang and call in the bangers when clueless hubby left for a condom? From hubby's POV we cannot know unless she reveals; but an omniscient 3rd-person POV would show.

Back to do-nothing vs jerk-off. The do-nothing guy is unrealistic IMHO. The jerk-off guy at least will gain sympathy from wittol-loving readers. Neither appeals to me; that's why I listed the other options. Both types of wimp face the same after-gang-bang dilemma: what to do?

The bangers will leave eventually, right? But maybe not till morning. Does he stand there watching all night?

After they leave, how does he deal with his wife? She KNOWS he did nothing; how does she react? Does she berate him for cowardice, for not calling for help? Is she disgusted with his weakness? Does she want to humiliate him? Does she feel degraded and abandoned; or excited, well-used, hot for more? Again, did she set this up; is this a prelude for a lifetime as a wittol?

 

[FantasisingMale]

I have written exactly one story (Double Your Fun) featuring wittols and it was not well-received. I do not have insights into the psychology of a guy standing there helplessly vs jerking off. I listed the options that occurred to me. "Standing there helplessly" seems his LEAST likely reaction.

I don't buy that the women can't tell it's not her husband doing her. It's not pitch-black; he can see from the outside so she certainly could see who came into the pool area. Did she submit willingly, or by force, or trickery? In fact, did SHE setup the gang-bang and call in the bangers when clueless hubby left for a condom? From hubby's POV we cannot know; but an omniscient 3rd-person POV would show.

Back to do-nothing vs jerk-off. The do-nothing guy is unrealistic IMHO. The jerk-off guy at least will gain sympathy from wittol-loving readers. Neither appeals to me; that's why I listed the other options. Both types of wimp face the same after-gang-bang dilemma: what to do? The bangers will leave eventually, right? But maybe not till morning. Does he stand there watching all night?

After they leave, how does he deal with his wife? She KNOWS he did nothing; how does she react? Does she berate him for cowardice, for not calling for help? Is she disgusted with his weakness? Does she want to humiliate him? Does she feel degraded and abandoned; or excited, well-used, hot for more? Again, did she set this up; is this a prelude for a lifetime as a wittol?

I was in prison a few years ago. Nothing serious but I was there. That's when my GF first started talking to me about things that made me aware she liked the cuckold/hotwife fantasy.

Anyway, there were a lot of fantasies she shared based on that scenario but one had no reality to it. But it was hers still. She wanted to be tied to a pole in the middle of the prison (not sure where) with silk pink ribbon around her and have every man in there use her.

There was nothing more to it. But that was a fantasy from a female perspective and the reality didn't come into question.

 

[Hypoxia]

I was in prison a few years ago. Nothing serious but I was there. That's when my GF first started talking to me about things that made me aware she liked the cuckold/hotwife fantasy.

Anyway, there were a lot of fantasies she shared based on that scenario but one had no reality to it. But it was hers still. She wanted to be tied to a pole in the middle of the prison (not sure where) with silk pink ribbon around her and have every man in there use her.

There was nothing more to it. But that was a fantasy from a female perspective and the reality didn't come into question.

That's more of a gangbang fantasy. A cuckqueen would watch YOU fucking around. You would be a wittol if you WANTED to watch her enthusiastically pull a train while you're 'officially' a couple.

Do you have any reason to think your GF acted-out any fantasies while you were incarcerated? Did/do you ever fantasize that maybe she DID act them out? Have you acted-out any such fantasies in your life together since then?