Cruel?

[Sluggmz]

I wrote a poem for a girl I had strong feelings for, and I happened to be best friends with her brother. I didn't take the initiative either, keep in mind she asked me to write her a poem. I was happy to oblige. The day after she showed it to mutual friends and her brother, and I was under ridicule. This was about a year ago and we are still friends, but for christmas I think I'm going to give her this poem :

I wrote you a poem, well here's poem number two.
It's meant to be private, but go ahead be a jew.

You can share it with friends and family alike.
Post it on facebook, you ungrateful kike.

Of course I'm just kidding, I cherish you so.
And care more about you, than you'll ever know.
(Upon realization, I reacted with "woah"
Because all this rhyming was coincidental.)

-

Do you think this will be a very mean gesture or is it suitable? I don't want to damper anyones x-mas.

(btw im not antisemitic)

 

[Senna Jawa]

Do you think this will be a very mean gesture or is it suitable? I don't want to damper anyones x-mas.

(btw im not antisemitic)

Embarrassing.

 

[pensivepoet]

I think i see what went wrong last christmas

 

[twelveoone]

Sluggmz sez: (btw im not antisemitic)


No you could be Palestinian Christians, in which case if the girl in question was also into self deprecation and or abuse, it would go over great.
I suspect that is not the case.
It may work if you are Jewish and this is employed as an ironic component.
There is no indication of that, I suspect THAT is not the case.
Suggest checking your house for any crosses hanging about, are they hooked?
Get back to us on that.

As is, it seems to be a weak poem, you do know how the hooked cross crowd misinterpreted Darwin as to 'weak' don't you?

ho, ho, ho

Lay a wreath on Ford's grave for me, a cheap one, that may have an ironic component.

btw the last time I checked
I'm not Jewish.

 

[pelegrino]

No poems this time man, just dump her and get on with your life.

 

[bronzeage]

I wrote a poem for a girl I had strong feelings for, and I happened to be best friends with her brother. I didn't take the initiative either, keep in mind she asked me to write her a poem. I was happy to oblige. The day after she showed it to mutual friends and her brother, and I was under ridicule. This was about a year ago and we are still friends, but for christmas I think I'm going to give her this poem :

I wrote you a poem, well here's poem number two.
It's meant to be private, but go ahead be a jew.

You can share it with friends and family alike.
Post it on facebook, you ungrateful kike.

Of course I'm just kidding, I cherish you so.
And care more about you, than you'll ever know.
(Upon realization, I reacted with "woah"
Because all this rhyming was coincidental.)

-

Do you think this will be a very mean gesture or is it suitable? I don't want to damper anyones x-mas.

(btw im not antisemitic)

You're not anti-semitic, but when a woman disappoints you, the best you can do is "be a jew" and "ungrateful kike."

Maybe this is just misapplied metaphor, but if not, you just insulted her brother, your best friend. Following up with "just kidding," doesn't help.

Don't ever give a poem to a woman that she wouldn't want to show to her friends, even when you know she never would.

 

[champagne1982]

Sluggmz,

You are ignorant, prejudiced and misinformed if you imagine posting hate language could in any way not project that you are a racist bigot, no matter what your disclaimer informs. You are ignored.

 

[pelegrino]

Sluggmz,

You are ignorant, prejudiced and misinformed if you imagine posting hate language could in any way not project that you are a racist bigot, no matter what your disclaimer informs. You are ignored.

Is this a general maxim according to you or just for Sluggmz, cause I find sometimes "hate language" quite artistic, imaginative, to the point and justifiable?
Not with race issues or other such matters in which we would all consider the use of such language as bigotry to say the least, but just between two lovers which is a private matter, I mean.
What about the "art of hating"? Is it an illegitimate poetry subject in your opinion?

 

[Magnetron]

Read some posts by this guy -> http://forum.literotica.com/member.php?find=lastposter&t=1122387

If you find you have a lot in common with him,

throw yourself off the nearest high rise building.

 

[Senna Jawa]

No poems this time man, just dump her and get on with your life.

She should dump him.

 

[pelegrino]

She should dump him.

Oh, I thought she had already done it, but no harm in doing it again, I suppose.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Oh, I thought she had already done it, but no harm in doing it again, I suppose.

He deserves ground glass in his sugar bowl never mind the dumping

 

[Sluggmz]

You guys are a hoot. I have no intention of dating her anymore, as she is in a serious relationship. She is a friend.

For those saying I'm ignorant or bigoted based off the slurs I used in the poem, you are jumping to bold conclusions based off of words I typed. To even assume I'm not some 400 pound guy making this up would be your burden. (btw I'm not). I use racism, sexism and injustices as humor in light of itself. I consider myself a man of moral integrity. As for the actual poem, I think the quality is pretty bad. I was high when I typed it out, and it's only true purpose was the jab at the beginning. I softened the rest because I wasn't trying to be an ultra-dick. By wasting your collective time with something "weak" like this, I turned out to be an ultra-dick™ anyhow.

 

[twelveoone]

Is this a general maxim according to you or just for Sluggmz, cause I find sometimes "hate language" quite artistic, imaginative, to the point and justifiable?
Not with race issues or other such matters in which we would all consider the use of such language as bigotry to say the least, but just between two lovers which is a private matter, I mean.
What about the "art of hating"? Is it an illegitimate poetry subject in your opinion?

in context...
No word is forbidden.
...in context...

But I am surprised Sluggmz did not edit this total jerk move for attention out yet.

And generally speaking
I am not antisemitic (or racist, etc.) generally is a tip-off for lack of understanding.

 

[Sluggmz]

in context...
No word is forbidden.
...in context...

But I am surprised Sluggmz did not edit this total jerk move for attention out yet.

And generally speaking
I am not antisemitic (or racist, etc.) generally is a tip-off for lack of understanding.

How so? I do not look down on the Jewish people, and hold them as dear to my heart as every other person of their respective cultures, gender, and lifestyle. I do not believe in people telling me what I can and cannot joke about or say, and people who choose to be offended offend me. You think I'm a jerk? How jewish of you.

 

[pelegrino]

in context...
No word is forbidden.
...in context...

But I am surprised Sluggmz did not edit this total jerk move for attention out yet.

And generally speaking
I am not antisemitic (or racist, etc.) generally is a tip-off for lack of understanding.

You are understood by me, 1201, thanks for your definition(s). The "art of hating" bothers me still though, but I suppose that's another subject for another day.

 

[pelegrino]

You guys are a hoot. I have no intention of dating her anymore, as she is in a serious relationship. She is a friend.

For those saying I'm ignorant or bigoted based off the slurs I used in the poem, you are jumping to bold conclusions based off of words I typed. To even assume I'm not some 400 pound guy making this up would be your burden. (btw I'm not). I use racism, sexism and injustices as humor in light of itself. I consider myself a man of moral integrity. As for the actual poem, I think the quality is pretty bad. I was high when I typed it out, and it's only true purpose was the jab at the beginning. I softened the rest because I wasn't trying to be an ultra-dick. By wasting your collective time with something "weak" like this, I turned out to be an ultra-dick™ anyhow.

1. don’t know 'bout a hoot but I'm definitely nocturnal
2. nothing wrong with fucking with a friend even if she is in a serious relationship. You can both say "alleluia" and get on with it.
3. from your short piece I didn’t get the feeling that you use racism, sexism and injustices as humor in light of itself.
4. don’t worry about collective or individual time.
5. been an ultra-dick™, your prerogative.

 

[Sluggmz]

from your short piece I didn’t get the feeling that you use racism, sexism and injustices as humor in light of itself.

im sorry you feel that way

 

[pensivepoet]

I'm pretty sure you offended the obese today as well.
Are all 400# people louts?
Maybe it's time to stop digging

 

[butters]

sluggish

if you can't see what's wrong with using those words in the context you did, then you're as thick as you are ugly inside. personally, i think you're just a troll looking to shock. i found you infinitely dull and unpoetic.

 

[twelveoone]

How so? I do not look down on the Jewish people, and hold them as dear to my heart as every other person of their respective cultures, gender, and lifestyle. I do not believe in people telling me what I can and cannot joke about or say, and people who choose to be offended offend me. You think I'm a jerk? How jewish of you.

I am Jewish, then. I just converted, and proud of it. Make of it what you will.
I did not tell you what you can joke about, nor am I offended by words.
What is offensive is the pejorative connotation attached, that if not responded to in the manner it was responded too would have an isolating effect on any person who was Jewish.
That was the jerk move, lack of consideration in a bid for attention, lack of thought in something that you thought was funny, the gist of which is I called her a kike in a Christmas poem.
What next, yellow stars on a tree?
Think it through, if you already have, well then, I'm proud to have offended you, and I don't easily get proud.

 

[Sluggmz]

I am Jewish, then. I just converted, and proud of it. Make of it what you will.
I did not tell you what you can joke about, nor am I offended by words.
What is offensive is the pejorative connotation attached, that if not responded to in the manner it was responded too would have an isolating effect on any person who was Jewish.
That was the jerk move, lack of consideration in a bid for attention, lack of thought in something that you thought was funny, the gist of which is I called her a kike in a Christmas poem.
What next, yellow stars on a tree?
Think it through, if you already have, well then, I'm proud to have offended you, and I don't easily get proud.

She is mexican, she won't get the joke anyway. Chill.

 

[Sluggmz]

sluggish

if you can't see what's wrong with using those words in the context you did, then you're as thick as you are ugly inside. personally, i think you're just a troll looking to shock. i found you infinitely dull and unpoetic.

His eyes scour poems, laying waste to their haven
of jest and of laughs, the words never forgave him.
"Your father was sick, he should have stuck baitin'
cuz' you're unworthy of a mom and you should have been satan's"
Calm down now, words, no need to be brash.
Some people are born with a stick up their ass.

 

[todski28]

Hey Sluggmz You're a cunt

just kidding........

essentially your poem boils down to that in my opinion, I wasn't actually calling you a cunt but I kind of was just trying to be funny....

the whole thing cries out, I have sand in my metaphorical vagina because you found someone else so i'm going to blindly lash out like a two year old then pretend that's it's just a joke between friends.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I wrote a poem for a girl I had strong feelings for, and I happened to be best friends with her brother. I didn't take the initiative either, keep in mind she asked me to write her a poem. I was happy to oblige. The day after she showed it to mutual friends and her brother, and I was under ridicule. This was about a year ago and we are still friends, but for christmas I think I'm going to give her this poem :

I wrote you a poem, well here's poem number two.
It's meant to be private, but go ahead be a jew.

You can share it with friends and family alike.
Post it on facebook, you ungrateful kike.

Of course I'm just kidding, I cherish you so.
And care more about you, than you'll ever know.
(Upon realization, I reacted with "woah"
Because all this rhyming was coincidental.)

-

Do you think this will be a very mean gesture or is it suitable? I don't want to damper anyones x-mas.

(btw im not antisemitic)

You guys are a hoot. I have no intention of dating her anymore, as she is in a serious relationship. She is a friend.

For those saying I'm ignorant or bigoted based off the slurs I used in the poem, you are jumping to bold conclusions based off of words I typed. To even assume I'm not some 400 pound guy making this up would be your burden. (btw I'm not). I use racism, sexism and injustices as humor in light of itself. I consider myself a man of moral integrity. As for the actual poem, I think the quality is pretty bad. I was high when I typed it out, and it's only true purpose was the jab at the beginning. I softened the rest because I wasn't trying to be an ultra-dick. By wasting your collective time with something "weak" like this, I turned out to be an ultra-dick™ anyhow.

Why ask if you don't want to know or want us to waste our 'collective time'? If you're going to contradict yourself it's best to reread what you originally posted.