Criticism Please....

[GolfGirl2448]

Hello Everyone,

I'm a new writer here and I've just written a few stories and would love some feedback. I'm not sure if they're appropriate or good enough to post on Literotica, but I've had some people who have read them tell me that they were. If anyone has any suggestions either leave a post on here or e-mail me at golfgirl2448@gmail.com, I would most definetely appreciate it. My website is http://xbabyblueeyezx.blogspot.com/ for any of you who are interested. If it's inappropriate to post my webpage on here I apologize, and I understand if this post is removed by the moderators.

Thanks and Have a Nice Day,

Katie

 

[fcdc]

Hello Everyone,

I'm a new writer here and I've just written a few stories and would love some feedback. I'm not sure if they're appropriate or good enough to post on Literotica, but I've had some people who have read them tell me that they were. If anyone has any suggestions either leave a post on here or e-mail me at golfgirl2448@gmail.com, I would most definetely appreciate it. My website is http://xbabyblueeyezx.blogspot.com/ for any of you who are interested. If it's inappropriate to post my webpage on here I apologize, and I understand if this post is removed by the moderators.

Thanks and Have a Nice Day,

Katie

Hi there. You're in the wrong forum. Try the Story Feedback forum, and provide direct links to the stories (people won't slog through this site, so they're not likely to slog through a blog.) If you have any questions about any of the stories, or any editing criticisms you particularly want, please include that too.

Hope this helps!

 

[Penelope Street]

Hello Everyone,

I'm a new writer here and I've just written a few stories and would love some feedback. I'm not sure if they're appropriate or good enough to post on Literotica, but I've had some people who have read them tell me that they were. If anyone has any suggestions either leave a post on here or e-mail me at {e-mail reference removed}, I would most definetely appreciate it. My website is http://xbabyblueeyezx.blogspot.com/ for any of you who are interested. If it's inappropriate to post my webpage on here I apologize, and I understand if this post is removed by the moderators.

Thanks and Have a Nice Day,

Katie

Hi Katie,

While some might argue that your post promotes another website, since the site you referenced contains a story and doesn't appear to be commercial, I don't believe it violates the spirit of the rules- though I am hardly the final arbiter on such matters. Your request doesn't seem so much different than cutting and pasting an unsubmitted story direcly into a thread- I've seen that done often enough. Personally, I am more inclined to leave comments regarding posted stories.

fwiw, forum rules may be found here:
http://www.literotica.com/support/forum_rules.shtml

Regardless, fcdc is right, the Story Feedback forum is the tradional place to ask for no-strings feedback. Don't fret about getting the two forums confused- it happens all the time. I can move this thread there if you prefer- or delete it if you'd rather just start a fresh one.

Lemme know!
Penny

 

[GolfGirl2448]

If you could move it that would be great Thanks...I know a lot of people won't look at it, but sometimes there's that one person that does and you get some good feedback from.

Thanks,

Katie

 

[Penelope Street]

Done. Good luck.

 

[GolfGirl2448]

Sorry I didnt see that there before I made my last posts, but I guess I'll just leave it there since I copied and pasted like most do in here

Thanks,

Katie