I know I'm kicking a dead horse here, and that my stuff is bland and shallow, but i want advice, and i wanna soak up as much as possible, so I'm posting the things that i believe to be my best
CRIES OF THE SHADOWS
In a world where
darkness screams
In a land where
no light beams
In a hell where
I am king
In a land
I've never been
My own foul tales
spun in darkness
My own foul cries
too hard to harness
Happiness seems so far away
I know it may return
not this day
I try and try to have
hope in the dark
I lie to myself
I can fix my broken heart
In my world
I lose my mind
In my land
I'm so confined
In my hell
I am not God
In my land
I'm just a fraud
Happiness is so far away
It will return
But not this day
I will for once find
hope in darkness
I will mend
the broken hearted
I will lend
a broken hand
I will save you
if i can
I will let my
screams ring clear
in my world
set free of fear
In a world
Ive lost my mind
In a land
I've been confined
In a hell
I have found God
In a land
I'm still a fraud
let me know what you all think guys
JD
CRIES OF THE SHADOWS
In a world where
darkness screams
In a land where
no light beams
In a hell where
I am king
In a land
I've never been
My own foul tales
spun in darkness
My own foul cries
too hard to harness
Happiness seems so far away
I know it may return
not this day
I try and try to have
hope in the dark
I lie to myself
I can fix my broken heart
In my world
I lose my mind
In my land
I'm so confined
In my hell
I am not God
In my land
I'm just a fraud
Happiness is so far away
It will return
But not this day
I will for once find
hope in darkness
I will mend
the broken hearted
I will lend
a broken hand
I will save you
if i can
I will let my
screams ring clear
in my world
set free of fear
In a world
Ive lost my mind
In a land
I've been confined
In a hell
I have found God
In a land
I'm still a fraud
let me know what you all think guys
JD