Creative yet deviant mind needed

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Would love for someone to write a story about my wife. OK, I know there are a lot of wife stories out there, but let me give you some details and if you are really interested I can send you a pic (g rated) to help you with the physical description etc.

My wife is very cute, girl-nextdoor cute. Great smile, great eyes, great butt and legs and a small chest (34b.) She is very innocent minded, never has any idea that others might think of her in a sexual way. That being said, my fantasies revolve around my cute, innocent wife being humiliated and degraded by others. She has several times been groped in a crowd and has had men randomly walk up to her and say rude sexual things about her all that have embrassed her and made her feel like a slut. Love the idea of her coworkers getting her drunk and having a rough gang-bang, or the thought of a group of men seeing her bachlorette party grab her and give her a rough wedding gift. Love the idea of men she knows and must see often using her and degrading her, and love the idea of her being forced to have sex with someone in her family, maybe wearing a mask so they don't know who she is, but she can see who they are the whole time.

Anyone interested?
 
quick question: the co-workers...both male and female, single sex? is the notion that she's the star of the show, as it were? is she really in control, or is she servicing everyone else?

ed
 
control

No, this would not be something she would be in control, or wanting. She would never do a woman on her own, she is a church going, very conservative and would never willingly do that, so thus I love the idea. The more humiliation the better.
 
um...this is shading into a category of lit that i don't care for (non-consent). if that's really where you want this to go, i can't help you, but it's a pretty popular category here.

ed
 
Well, Ed, in Lit "the victim has to enjoy her(his) rape by the end of the story". I know Allhandsondeck stated this would be a fantasy for him since she'd never willingly do another woman, etc., but the story may have to be twisted at the end that she confesses to her hubby it has been a secret fanyasy of hers as well. (Or perhaps he read her journal, overheard a phone conversation, read an E-mail to someone, ETC, where she confessed her fantasy and he wanted to surprise her with it.)
 
Secret admission

Surely the important thing is that she admit's she enjoy's it even if it's only to herself. Then it's upto the reader to decide whether or not she was raped or whether she gave some unconcious assistance to her attacker/seducer
 
sorry guys but that's a bit too nebulous for me. but hey, nothing's stopping anybody else from picking up the ball and running w/ it.

ed
 
Hmmm....

Is this story to be written -for- allhandsondeck, or is it just to be a 'generic' Loving Wives Lit story that happens to have the female lead catered to fit allhandsondeck's wife?

Personally, I'd have trouble writing a story for someone, since I feel I have to live up to their expectations. If I write for myself, I can get by easier, since I only need to appease myself.

It sounds interesting, but if there's to be a general flow of action, I'd like to see these ideas streamlined into a quasi-outline of sorts. Admittedly, that detracts from the excitement of reading such a story. Hmmm indeed. :)
 
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I could do this.

allhandsondeck said:
Would love for someone to write a story about my wife. OK, I know there are a lot of wife stories out there, but let me give you some details and if you are really interested I can send you a pic (g rated) to help you with the physical description etc.

Anyone interested?

I'd be willing to take a stab at it. You can take a look at some of my previous stuff and see if you like my style.
 
notnaive: you might wanna give the guy a link to make things easier. also, consider putting a link to your stores in your profile as your homepage. :>

ed
 
flawed_ethics said:
... If I write for myself, I can get by easier, since I only need to appease myself. ...
You are lucky; I am a right bastard when it comes to criticising my own work!
 
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