creative juices running on empty

[SkarlittFeenicks]

I would like some feedback on some of my work so that I can start writing again. I have all these starts in my head, but when I sit down nothing comes out. I should probably pick up where I left off on the others, either way some feedback and the right comments can get me going again.So if someone wouldn't mind just taking a peak and letting me know what you think. You can either comment on the story itself or drop me a line. Malevolentraven@yahoo.com Thanks in advance.

 

[jomar]

I would like some feedback on some of my work so that I can start writing again. I have all these starts in my head, but when I sit down nothing comes out. I should probably pick up where I left off on the others, either way some feedback and the right comments can get me going again.So if someone wouldn't mind just taking a peak and letting me know what you think. You can either comment on the story itself or drop me a line. Malevolentraven@yahoo.com Thanks in advance.

You might have better luck with this request on the story feedback forum. Good luck.