couple swpaing

[Guest]

3 couple have fun in one house in same room

 

[Chicklet]

3 couple have fun in one house in same room

uh huh...

and??

any story line ideas?

 

[Guest]

they end up having sex with diffrent parners and it will invole 3somes 4somes and moresomes bi ........... can some one write a story like that

 

[Chicklet]

what about this?

A couple is participating in one of those roleplaying games, a weekend murder mystery with a few other couples from the area. they go to this big house in the country and the scene is set, so to speak. someone is a murderer and they have the weekend to find out who.

The couples don't know each other very well, they've seen each other around but haven't really spoken.

The story could be a half murder mystery half orgy type thing.

I would like to read a story sort of like that. (Yes, *read,* not *write,* but *read*!!)

Chicklet

 

[Axeltheswede]

swapping story

Go to the "Group" category, swing a dead cat, you'll hit six stories like this the first time around.

Nice twist though, Chicklet. Might be hard to do. Problem is, it could turn out like a murder mystery with the sex tacked on, or vice versa. Any ideas on how to integrate the two threads?

 

[Chicklet]

Hrm...well...we could have the POV be from the "murderer" and as she/he sleeps with one person after another, that lover becomes eliminated from the game. i don't know, really, I just thought it'd be cool...for someone with a better imagination than I have = )

 

[Guest]

Re: swapping story

... Any ideas on how to integrate the two threads? ...

Maybe have a "Rape "Weekend", like a Murder Weekend but who raped whom?

Or an Adultery Weekend? Not who, but how many??

 

[Guest]

Basic Scenario which leads to anything?

Right, try this:

There are two couples who organise "Murder Weekends". One couple act as the organisers and one of the other couple, who masquerade as participants, is always the murderer. Couples alternate and sometimes the wife or sometimes the husband is the murderer, etc. etc. etc.

They decide to have a "Rape Weekend."

Wife of organiser comes into room of one participating couple while husband is in bar.

She explains that, just as there is no murder at a "Murder Weekend" there is not actual rape at a "Rape Weekend". However, rape victims can be questioned, while murder victims cannot.

Therefore, to make it real, a man will come into her room in a few minutes and tear her night-dress and generally be obnoxious, but will not actually harm her. This is all voluntary, explains the organising wife.

Woman says OK and curtains are drawn to darken room and woman gets into bed.

Build tension a little here by making her wait and give her thoughts.

Man comes in and ... fake rape scene from there!

Maybe she lets him shag her, "for realism"?
Maybe she panics and fights for real and he leaves bruises?
Maybe she panics and fights for real and he actually rapes her?

Husband's reaction could be good/bad.

Maybe the others try to solve it and get turned on and various "meetings" happen?

Maybe it all turns into one big swap weekend, except one couple who are horrified, but stay to watch?

Now if "Unregistered" will register so we can identify her/his comments we can discuss this.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

Charm,

I really like that idea!

Someone has to write it now! (definatly not me)

 

[Chicklet]

Chicklet, that sounds like the premise for a novel, lol. Just wondering how you are going to develop that much story line in a short story?

Well, technically, a short story could be up to 40 pages and maybe more...

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

It could be, if ya want...but who's going to take the time to read it?

are you saying my stories aren't worth reading?!?! = p

But seriously, I'd read it.

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]

 

[Axeltheswede]

couple swapping

I agree. There is a limit to the number of pages I can read on a 'puter screen. It is definitely less than forty.

This story has grown into a monster. Anyone looking for an idea for an epic, jump in and give it a try.

 

[Chicklet]

Hrm...

actually, a few years ago when I was initially excited to have discovered the world of the internet I found a site with free books on it. Not copywrited books, but one's old enough that they're free for all now. I read Alice Through the Looking Glass, Uncle Tom's Cabin, and a bunch of others that I can't remember. But anyways, I read them all off the computer screen.

Maybe that's why my eyesight is so bad now?!

 

[Guest]

Shopping tip: You can get shoes for 85 cents at bowling alleys

For those unwilling to see, or understand, there are better offers than this.

 

[Reshbod]

How about sexual laser tag (or something similar) where the teams are men against the women (straight) or everyone for themselves (bi) and the person who "shoots" an opposing player and "gets them". The person or team that gets the most "kills" wins. This needs much work but could be very interesting.

 

[Tatewaki]

Hrm...

actually, a few years ago when I was initially excited to have discovered the world of the internet I found a site with free books on it. Not copywrited books, but one's old enough that they're free for all now. I read Alice Through the Looking Glass, Uncle Tom's Cabin, and a bunch of others that I can't remember. But anyways, I read them all off the computer screen.

Maybe that's why my eyesight is so bad now?!

That sounds like Project Gutenberg.

-T

 

[Guest]

How about sexual laser tag (or something similar)

This needs much work ...

... but could be very interesting.

Oh, yes.

It does need a lot of effort, but IMHO it is the best new idea posted on this board for N days.

So say what you will, Axel.., Chicklet, Pretty.., but this idea grabs me at a level beyond mere one story. Here is a potential idea stream, IMHO.

 

[Chicklet]

I would love to read an erotic murder mystery. Just had to say so again. Someone should write it.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

no <whimper> but I *am* trying to think of one. This is an occasion where using a backwards storyline is good (start with end and move your way towards the front)

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

that's a good idea. we could do that.